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toy #4
6/21/21, 4:39 AM
Excellent work. Is the next chapter still being "packaged"?
6/21/21, 3:43 AM
So hot. Please make more stories like that and get kinkier. ;)
CMC
6/21/21, 1:16 AM
Extremely hot! Love how you showed some of their lives after becoming drones.
6/20/21, 10:23 PM
waiting for the next chapter :)
6/20/21, 10:21 PM
this was awesome
6/20/21, 8:38 PM
congratulations brian!! always the best stories. Dont stop!!
6/18/21, 2:58 AM
I gotta disagree with @fattenupmen (not to yuck his yum though, bc everyone is into different stuff and that's fantastic!) this story doesn't need weight gain or mpreg. Selfishly I'm not into either of those things, but more than that I think the existing chapters don't set up a foundation for it. It's hypno and brainwashing over the course of only a few days and I think introducing those elements in chapter 12 of a series would feel like it came out of nowhere.

6/20/21, 7:38 PM
@Curiosity don't worry, buddy, my main concern now is to keep the story consistent. I appreciate every comment and suggestion, but sometimes they don't fit so well on the story for the previous established plot, and in those cases I prefer to save them for another future story, if those ideas connect with me.
Anonymous
6/18/21, 10:23 PM
i say go for 3! This is a great story and you'll do fine!

6/20/21, 7:22 PM
Thank you so much for the positive words, Anonymous Reader! The next chapter is on the way, and growing healthy!
6/15/21, 2:36 PM
Keep writing dude, this is great. Its making me both horny as hell but also feeling that gut-punch of second hand horror and humiliation. It's hard to read, but only for the best reasons. I hope we're working towards a good ending ... or at least not a bad ending.

6/15/21, 4:56 PM
@Shilva Thanks a lot, Shilva! I'l glad you're enjoying this story. About the ending, I'm still not sure about it. I have pictured a bad one (a very fucked up ending), and another good ending. I haven't decided which one to use yet, but there's still good time to decide. Let's see how things keep evolving!

6/20/21, 10:43 AM
@Plymouth58 Holy, this is so good and hits all my kinks perfectly. Specifically, I love the idea of Kyle's mind aware of whats being done to him, rather then remanining unaware of his degradation. I was sad that it only lasted for a while. Speaking of that, I was wondering If I could suggest someething for the fucked up bad ending you mentioned. Would love it if in that fucked up ending, to make it a really bad ending, as a punishment, Kyle's given full awareness back and inside knows whats being done to him but is forced to obey even as fucked up things are being done to him. Like as fun as the mindbreak is, it's much more humiliating and peverse when the Green Lantern knows and is aware of his humiliation, amd hating every second of it. So that the thugs really relish in knowing that they have this mighty superhero at their mercy, all the while knowing he's dying inside. Would love to see something like that. What do you think?

6/20/21, 7:21 PM
@keeprofd Hi! I'm glad you like this kinky tale, buddy. Don't count with Kyle's conscious mind giving up, pal! he's a superhero and if he have resisted all along 11 chapters, he is not going to give up so easily. Also, his mind reprograming was so poorly made, so... well, just wait and see what's next for our degraded hero, I think you're gonna enjoy with the upcoming chapters. Thanks a lot for your suggestions and ideas! I'm happy to see the fucked up ending is getting this strong feedback. If you have some other ideas to spice up the bad ending, I'm always open to hear them.
6/20/21, 7:05 PM
You have a real gift for writing.