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6/15/21, 2:36 PM
Keep writing dude, this is great. Its making me both horny as hell but also feeling that gut-punch of second hand horror and humiliation. It's hard to read, but only for the best reasons. I hope we're working towards a good ending ... or at least not a bad ending.

6/15/21, 4:56 PM
@Shilva Thanks a lot, Shilva! I'l glad you're enjoying this story. About the ending, I'm still not sure about it. I have pictured a bad one (a very fucked up ending), and another good ending. I haven't decided which one to use yet, but there's still good time to decide. Let's see how things keep evolving!

6/20/21, 10:43 AM
@Plymouth58 Holy, this is so good and hits all my kinks perfectly. Specifically, I love the idea of Kyle's mind aware of whats being done to him, rather then remanining unaware of his degradation. I was sad that it only lasted for a while. Speaking of that, I was wondering If I could suggest someething for the fucked up bad ending you mentioned. Would love it if in that fucked up ending, to make it a really bad ending, as a punishment, Kyle's given full awareness back and inside knows whats being done to him but is forced to obey even as fucked up things are being done to him. Like as fun as the mindbreak is, it's much more humiliating and peverse when the Green Lantern knows and is aware of his humiliation, amd hating every second of it. So that the thugs really relish in knowing that they have this mighty superhero at their mercy, all the while knowing he's dying inside. Would love to see something like that. What do you think?

6/20/21, 7:21 PM
@keeprofd Hi! I'm glad you like this kinky tale, buddy. Don't count with Kyle's conscious mind giving up, pal! he's a superhero and if he have resisted all along 11 chapters, he is not going to give up so easily. Also, his mind reprograming was so poorly made, so... well, just wait and see what's next for our degraded hero, I think you're gonna enjoy with the upcoming chapters. Thanks a lot for your suggestions and ideas! I'm happy to see the fucked up ending is getting this strong feedback. If you have some other ideas to spice up the bad ending, I'm always open to hear them.
6/20/21, 7:05 PM
You have a real gift for writing.
6/20/21, 6:38 PM
So enjoy Brian's stories. The dom/sub themes are so effing hot. Especially love Jax' little side trips--the freshman in the bleachers and the girl's little brother. Thanks Brian, for all the hard work and hot stories.
6/20/21, 6:08 PM
great story! it made me goon out on my monkey boner. more please! oook!
Rspark
6/20/21, 5:23 PM
Nice buildup for characters and detailing their backgrounds and motivations. Unfortunate that this series is dead when nothing else happening aside the initial hypnosis. There's a lot of ways this series could go but I understand if you have no motivation to continue. Best of luck with your other stories!
6/20/21, 4:33 PM
This series is nice. Will you write about what happens to Bret after he is finished being converted in this Crazy Week storyline?

Ng5
6/20/21, 5:13 PM
@ReaderJason20, BT5365 found himself a nice job and a loving master in Drone World: Drone World Rising. I plan on writing a separate version of events of the first 3 chapters, including more details and more character development now that I've had more practice at this and more personal growth as well.
Anonymous
6/20/21, 5:02 PM
only complaint is about where you ended the story... if your goal is to create jerk material, you shouldn't end a chapter before a climactic event.
nycboot
6/20/21, 5:01 PM
Great story, but I know your style and know that the predictable ending will be ultimately unsatisfying (to me) - that Austin & Levi will remain hypnotized and Blaine - however neutralized - will wind up the winner. I guess I'm too old - I find preppy style so very unsexy - it's like neutering them - but of course we're all different. But I have to say that induction scene was totally superb.
6/20/21, 4:53 PM
This story started out well, but too many characters doing to many uninteresting things...I loved the 'Dickhead' stuff, but it went down from there. Is this ever going to turn into a 'Gay' story ???? So far not sexy at all !!!
Anonymous
6/20/21, 4:38 PM
Your stories are always so well written! This ties in perfectly with the overall drone universe that you've created!