Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/19/21, 8:37 PM
Hot story! Really love your work. Hope you post more!
6/19/21, 7:38 PM
Hi there - just wanted to comment to say I've really enjoyed this so far - I loved FFIX, and Zidane especially, so seeing him controlled/hypnotized here has been really fun, as has seeing Blank struggle with what to do. I hope you're able to come back to it some day!
Limbo
5/28/21, 1:27 AM
i still wait for the chapter where Dave will pop Bobby's cherry. the excitement makes me so horny. 😅

6/10/21, 8:10 PM
@Limbo Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying it - life has got in the way of carrying on the story for now but I will get back to it.

6/19/21, 12:30 AM
@Tha Avnanizeis Yay! Please don't make us wait for 2 years like you did between chapters 3 and 4...

6/19/21, 6:37 PM
@rayn - I won't, don't worry, I should get some time to work on it soon enough.
mbblover
6/19/21, 6:01 PM
THANK YOU FOR YOUR QUICK REPLY!.. Curious, have you ever wrote or thought about writing a really pervy wicked delicious kinky story about a superhero? i have ideas if you would like me to send them to you!..

6/19/21, 6:13 PM
Oh god you have no ideal =)) I'm a fan of superhero and the first story i wrote on my phone 1 week ago was about a superhero... I wrote 3 chapter then deleted it cause i can't find a name for that superhero and some detail in that story contain a lot of inappropriate stuff... To me everything have to logic, if that super hero is just someone brawny and you just random chose his super power it would be no fun. But if you want, when i done writing chapter 5 of this story, i will write a series about superhero. Just love superman but i don't hold his copyright so don't want to end up in a fan fiction. A new name will better. Thank you for asking @mbblover
Mark
6/19/21, 6:08 PM
This was amazing!
6/18/21, 12:19 AM
welp, i thought he would make him suck him off for his cum is also a fluid or fuckthe dad, but this is ok too :3

6/18/21, 12:45 AM
@Udems hi thank you for your reply, glad you are okay with it!!! this story will have a lot of flip flop, and the role bottom or top will not fixed. But i'm the one of logic so i try to make everything slow to break people psychological, that always my favorite part. Why the character have a hole or a dick but not gonna use that xD, that's the waste. He will fuck when the time come and i want Kinston enjoy to be a virgin bottom XD

6/19/21, 1:31 AM
Be a bottom to finish as a top fucking dads? Sure thing, sign me up! xD @Number 2

6/19/21, 6:01 PM
yes!! thank you for support me xD @Udems
mbblover
6/19/21, 2:12 PM
PLEASE KEEP THE PSYCHOLOGICAL aspect! the whole power control role reversal and how the musclebound super alpha stud barbarian is both seduced, captured, conquered and converted by both pleasure physically and the re-wiring of his brain is hot hot! also keep the slow burn! many chapters of this slow burn, instead of a quick wham bam thank you mame!.. thank you!

6/19/21, 5:53 PM
Oh god thank you so much, if i didn't misunderstood your comment. I will try to keep this slowww... but if you want me to slow the story down more, i will try my best too. Thank you one more time for your comment <3 love ya @mbblover
Willie Cici
6/19/21, 2:36 PM
I had to edit the story to remove one of the pics as it was no longer available online. Apologies. As usual, the comments regarding sequels surprise me. Any ideas are are welcome.
6/19/21, 1:42 PM
that's an awesome concept. i really loved to read it, making me strain
Martin
6/19/21, 1:40 PM
This is pushing all my buttons! You're on a streak, it seems! I love it!