Recent Comments

Willie Cici
6/19/21, 2:36 PM
I had to edit the story to remove one of the pics as it was no longer available online. Apologies. As usual, the comments regarding sequels surprise me. Any ideas are are welcome.
6/19/21, 1:42 PM
that's an awesome concept. i really loved to read it, making me strain
Martin
6/19/21, 1:40 PM
This is pushing all my buttons! You're on a streak, it seems! I love it!
Martin
6/19/21, 1:33 PM
This was one of your best, Willie! Congrats! Good to see you back!
6/19/21, 1:24 PM
Absolutely one of my new favorites! I hope we can get to follow them with a sequel!
6/19/21, 11:59 AM
Excellent short story (I hope there are more chapters cuming up)! I could visualize all of the action going on while reading. In ways, I wanted to be Billy and then I wanted to be Garrett. You have a gift for storytelling!
Doug
6/19/21, 11:17 AM
Please let there be more yo this wonderfully detailed story.
Jason
6/19/21, 10:09 AM
I hope you are going to continue this! That's a good one!
Jun 17, 2021
6/19/21, 8:25 AM
Fabulous! Extremely well done!!
Mindwhisperer
6/13/21, 1:49 PM
This series is exceptionally good and has the potential to be excellent. A little more attention needs to be devoted to developing the Jax character's descent into submission. In real life the reaction of an alpha to his transformation does not happen quite so smoothly and rapidly.

6/19/21, 7:29 AM
Yeah, I always feel like I should go slower but at the same time I try to balance what I want with what I think most readers want too. But rest assured his transformation won't be straighforward. I'll take it as slow as I can @Mindwhisperer