Recent Comments

6/19/21, 1:24 PM
Absolutely one of my new favorites! I hope we can get to follow them with a sequel!
6/19/21, 11:59 AM
Excellent short story (I hope there are more chapters cuming up)! I could visualize all of the action going on while reading. In ways, I wanted to be Billy and then I wanted to be Garrett. You have a gift for storytelling!
Doug
6/19/21, 11:17 AM
Please let there be more yo this wonderfully detailed story.
Jason
6/19/21, 10:09 AM
I hope you are going to continue this! That's a good one!
Jun 17, 2021
6/19/21, 8:25 AM
Fabulous! Extremely well done!!
Mindwhisperer
6/13/21, 1:49 PM
This series is exceptionally good and has the potential to be excellent. A little more attention needs to be devoted to developing the Jax character's descent into submission. In real life the reaction of an alpha to his transformation does not happen quite so smoothly and rapidly.

6/19/21, 7:29 AM
Yeah, I always feel like I should go slower but at the same time I try to balance what I want with what I think most readers want too. But rest assured his transformation won't be straighforward. I'll take it as slow as I can @Mindwhisperer
6/13/21, 2:26 AM
Can't wait for the 3rd chapter..Hope it's a really long one ! Want to see how these two bro's behavior starts to change at school !!!

6/19/21, 7:28 AM
Just added it. Longest so far. I hope you cum with it @little tiny tim
6/12/21, 5:52 PM
hot. Seriously, I love this story. Can't wait for the next part

Anonymous
6/12/21, 10:54 PM
favorite new series! Will we get a new chapter each week? Anywhere we should go for early access or support?

6/19/21, 7:27 AM
Follow me on twitter @kranyatz for more info and updates.
LustyStallion
6/19/21, 6:23 AM
Absolutely fucking loved it. I really enjoyed your build up and also found the quick changes at the end in time with my wanks. thanks dude!
Anonymous
6/19/21, 5:23 AM
Defs had to read this in three sittings ha...got so hard each time it was intense. Perfect pacing and talk...so hot. More exactly like this please.