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6/18/21, 12:20 AM
SUPER HOT!!! love the concept and plot. had to go back a couple times to re-read the rules and clear some confusion. and would have loved more detail or maybe resistance from the two, but overall very creative and fun. hoping for a sequel
Anonymous
6/18/21, 12:15 AM
Cool!! Looking forward to the mental transformation of Danny!!
6/17/21, 11:56 PM
Algo apurado todo, pero siempre aprecio historias en español y más con dilfs obedeciendo a jovenes y siendo sumisos <3
Jun 17, 2021
6/17/21, 11:44 PM
EXTRAORDINARIO...
Martin
6/17/21, 9:50 PM
Lovely romantic story!
6/17/21, 8:11 PM
Oh my gosh, another Kyle story that focuses on a lot of weight gain?? I'm sold!! If you still need a beta reader/editor, maybe we could talk more on Discord? I Then we can also discuss upcoming chapters and the fat Kyle story!! If
6/17/21, 6:27 PM
love your icon, chapter is ridiculously long, and i love that so much. truly excellent content. i pick 3, keep writing! you're amazing at your craft, to the point i felt the need to comment, and i rarely do that. i also vote for the bad ending! i wanna see Kyle ruined, i love him ever since that run in the 90s. nice including of Terry here too, hopefully he will get to fuck his friend and idol? Terry is gay after all, how hot would it be to fuck his older formerly straight best friend and boss? id also LOVE to see weight gain and/or mpreg. Kyle forced to fatten himself up to ruin his gorgeous fit and muscled body, or Kyle getting fat and pregnant with and giving birth to T-Bone's black babies would be super hot, super emasculating and humiliating, and another layer of domination and humiliation for Kyle to suffer through. please consider this, i think it would be an amazing fit, but look forward to whatever you cum up with in the future! excellent job and keep it up! also, would love to see Kyle call T-Bone his Black Daddy or just Daddy. super hot interracial content!!

6/17/21, 7:29 PM
Hi again, @Fattenupmen! Thanks a lot for comment and for all of your nice words, they mean a lot for someone who is pretty new on writing stories! I appreciate all the comments and of I course consider all the ideas and suggestions. Kyle's misadventures are far from over! is just that I must find the right moment to introduce them, and due the slow pacing that I'm giving to this tale the suggestions are not appeared yet, but that's about to change. I don't want to spoil any surprise, but I think you're gonna like the upcoming chapters, buddy! I in fact have been thinking on another new unrelated story with Kyle that would include a lot of weight gain since you suggested the idea back in chapter 8, you left me thinking on some possibilities that would be hot to explore. And of course I take note that your vote goes for the fucked up ending! Stay in contact, buddy!
Anonymous
6/17/21, 4:45 PM
Option 3 with Joe as House Alpha
Anonymous
6/17/21, 3:17 PM
I'm waiting for your next story.
Anonymous
6/17/21, 3:14 PM
How about the father try to find the clown for his son's birthday party, but then he was brainwashed and turn into the clown instead.