Recent Comments

Doug
6/17/21, 8:33 AM
Absolutely terrific, I loved every second and can't wait for further parts. I adore continuing stories and your Rabbit series was superb. Thank you for the pleasure you give to your readers.
6/17/21, 8:02 AM
Isla de los Condenados : Island of the Condemned .

6/17/21, 8:11 AM
@Kr0p "Condenados" is the translation that Google served up when I asked how to say "Island of the Damned" in Spanish. It still kind of makes sense to me that the names would convey this dual meaning--"condemned" indicating that it was a prison island, "damned" indicating that the prisoners never returned alive.
Anonymous
6/17/21, 7:58 AM
Took a little while to get going, but once it does it’s a fantastic piece of work! Love the way you position Zak as the only one who takes the time to learn how things work, allowing him to then rise to power. Only slight critique I would have is that the major changes at the end all come so thick and fast (pun intended!) It might have been nice to see a little more build up in those last ones, rather than just jumping straight to “y’all need to fuck now”
6/17/21, 7:03 AM
This was crazy hot. To whoever the author is bravo, this was very well written. Please continue this outside the competition. As you said, 3 years is a lot of time. Maybe a sequel broken down to 3 acts that tackle each year of torment? Just food for thought.
6/17/21, 5:09 AM
Just found this story and was boned the whole time I read it. It was a quick one, but had my favorite hot programed sex. The scenes were so real I felt like I was in the dressing room (I wish). Now, when I go into a store's dressing room, I look for the same light to flash at my naked body. More chapters, please!
6/16/21, 7:55 PM
Really interesting idea, but it feels underdeveloped right now. I wanted more build-up, including descriptions of the Dotters, their songs, and the whole Rainbow Station world before Mark got sucked into that world. Also, Mark's name suddenly changes to Steve in the middle of the story, then goes back to Mark.

6/16/21, 10:55 PM
@Hypnothrill Thank you for noticing, I accidentally left in the old name that I had for the character in an earlier draft! I do plan on making a sequel that explores the world of Happy Rainbow Station in a little more detail with Dave

6/17/21, 3:49 AM
@Crpal Oh good! I kept hoping that Dave would enter the story at the end.
6/17/21, 3:30 AM
That was extremely impressive. I cannot believe how highly educated and intensely hot that story was with all the many excellent descriptive words. It was more than porn and basic smut. It's just so professionally written but also just so hot in every way possible. If you had thrown in some more kink and even more dirty talk; you would have checked off most of my boxes. lol.
6/17/21, 2:57 AM
this was so good! I really hope you write more, the seed changing him was really hot! I hope you go more into that if you write a next chapter!
DB
6/17/21, 1:08 AM
great story. wanted to keep reading while stroking my own cock. I need Lex seed!
6/17/21, 12:52 AM
"“Pheromones? What the hell do pheromones have to do with anything?" Oh Javi, have a seat, we need to talk. Pheromomes have everything to do with everything. But I think Señor Hypnothrill is going to have you discover that for yourself. Or maybe by force, who knows. Either way it will be fun. Breathe deeply and I'll see you on the other side, Captain Javier Ramirez, if that remains your name.