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Anonymous
6/17/21, 2:09 PM
option 1
Zac
6/17/21, 12:02 PM
Need Lex seed!
6/15/21, 8:45 PM
fabulous work! my favorite story in a long time. i really enjoy the details of hypno and oblivion!

6/17/21, 11:39 AM
@halibobo Thank you! I've been working on Chapter 3 a fair bit lately. Hopefully won't be long, but health issues are being rather problematic lately, so no promises.
6/17/21, 11:13 AM
Your stories are amazing! Please keep us update.
6/17/21, 10:04 AM
Awesome story but, as the anonymous commenter said, it did feel a bit rushed towards the end. That said, I nutted so job done!
6/17/21, 9:15 AM
More story about these guy or new guys would be awesome. Nice story.
Doug
6/17/21, 8:33 AM
Absolutely terrific, I loved every second and can't wait for further parts. I adore continuing stories and your Rabbit series was superb. Thank you for the pleasure you give to your readers.
6/17/21, 8:02 AM
Isla de los Condenados : Island of the Condemned .

6/17/21, 8:11 AM
@Kr0p "Condenados" is the translation that Google served up when I asked how to say "Island of the Damned" in Spanish. It still kind of makes sense to me that the names would convey this dual meaning--"condemned" indicating that it was a prison island, "damned" indicating that the prisoners never returned alive.
Anonymous
6/17/21, 7:58 AM
Took a little while to get going, but once it does it’s a fantastic piece of work! Love the way you position Zak as the only one who takes the time to learn how things work, allowing him to then rise to power. Only slight critique I would have is that the major changes at the end all come so thick and fast (pun intended!) It might have been nice to see a little more build up in those last ones, rather than just jumping straight to “y’all need to fuck now”
6/17/21, 7:03 AM
This was crazy hot. To whoever the author is bravo, this was very well written. Please continue this outside the competition. As you said, 3 years is a lot of time. Maybe a sequel broken down to 3 acts that tackle each year of torment? Just food for thought.