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6/17/21, 5:09 AM
Just found this story and was boned the whole time I read it. It was a quick one, but had my favorite hot programed sex. The scenes were so real I felt like I was in the dressing room (I wish). Now, when I go into a store's dressing room, I look for the same light to flash at my naked body. More chapters, please!
6/16/21, 7:55 PM
Really interesting idea, but it feels underdeveloped right now. I wanted more build-up, including descriptions of the Dotters, their songs, and the whole Rainbow Station world before Mark got sucked into that world. Also, Mark's name suddenly changes to Steve in the middle of the story, then goes back to Mark.

6/16/21, 10:55 PM
@Hypnothrill Thank you for noticing, I accidentally left in the old name that I had for the character in an earlier draft! I do plan on making a sequel that explores the world of Happy Rainbow Station in a little more detail with Dave

6/17/21, 3:49 AM
@Crpal Oh good! I kept hoping that Dave would enter the story at the end.
6/17/21, 3:30 AM
That was extremely impressive. I cannot believe how highly educated and intensely hot that story was with all the many excellent descriptive words. It was more than porn and basic smut. It's just so professionally written but also just so hot in every way possible. If you had thrown in some more kink and even more dirty talk; you would have checked off most of my boxes. lol.
6/17/21, 2:57 AM
this was so good! I really hope you write more, the seed changing him was really hot! I hope you go more into that if you write a next chapter!
DB
6/17/21, 1:08 AM
great story. wanted to keep reading while stroking my own cock. I need Lex seed!
6/17/21, 12:52 AM
"“Pheromones? What the hell do pheromones have to do with anything?" Oh Javi, have a seat, we need to talk. Pheromomes have everything to do with everything. But I think Señor Hypnothrill is going to have you discover that for yourself. Or maybe by force, who knows. Either way it will be fun. Breathe deeply and I'll see you on the other side, Captain Javier Ramirez, if that remains your name.
6/17/21, 12:43 AM
this story is amazing! I cant wait for more
6/17/21, 12:09 AM
lex need more seed !!
Anonymous
6/16/21, 11:56 PM
excellent work
6/16/21, 11:51 PM
So hot!! I was stoned the first time I read this, and man did it hit different 😅 thanks for posting! Would love to read more chapters.