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6/17/21, 12:43 AM
this story is amazing! I cant wait for more
6/17/21, 12:09 AM
lex need more seed !!
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6/16/21, 11:56 PM
excellent work
6/16/21, 11:51 PM
So hot!! I was stoned the first time I read this, and man did it hit different 😅 thanks for posting! Would love to read more chapters.
6/16/21, 7:16 PM
For sure keep writing! Either if you continue this or start a new story I love what you have so far and will always be a fan if you continue something new and have your sights set on other heroes! I love this chapters like the others but if you're feeling iffy about it maybe take a break write another story and then come back? up to you though what ever you write ill support it because its too hot not too haha. I also agree with the poster above. If you were to look into other heroes to write about I would love to see one about the Young Justice members. I would love to see what you would have in store for someone like Superboy and Kid flash!

6/16/21, 10:55 PM
@AxelCyclone Awww, buddy, thank you so much for your nice words! for a guy giving his first steps on writing, is very encouraging to read that. I'll go ahead with GL, but after reading the comments, I think I'll start to think on something for Kid Flash and Young Justice. I just need to find a good scenario for it. Thank you!

6/16/21, 11:13 PM
@Plymouth58 You got this! And I couldn't even tell that it was your first steps. looks more like you've already done your first mile haha. excited to see you continue the GL story and if you ever want to brain storm some ideas for the YJ story or toss some ideas around let me know! i love talking about possible stories and it usually ends up making me want to write up some stories as well. Have a good day!
6/16/21, 7:28 PM
3! Absolutely please keep writing it! This was a great chapter and you set it up for the next one to be even hotter!

6/16/21, 10:59 PM
@Curiosity Thanks, buddy! Oh, big plans are coming on the way, he, he. Thanks for the support!
6/16/21, 10:56 PM
Just echoing Dace, the way the narration takes us into that zonked fucktoy jock mindset is crazy hot. The way you write sex is spot-on, too. Yum. Thanks for posting!
6/16/21, 3:38 PM
I fucking love how much you focus on the mindbreak of this, its so hot seeing a toughguy hero being destroyed from within like this, might be the hottest chapter yet. I vote for the bad ending btw, we see these heroes win enough!

6/16/21, 10:47 PM
@Jockass Hi! Oh, you have no idea how happy makes me to read that you find this chapter as the hottest to date, I'm so glad you like it so much! I take note that you vote goes for the very fucked up ending. I agree, the heroes win so many times!
6/16/21, 7:38 AM
This was another great installment in this story! I think you should not worry so much about the possibility of grammar mistakes. Even the best stories often have a few; you don't need perfect grammar. There was nothing in this chapter that distracted from the story or interfered with understanding what was going on. The best part of the story is the hot ideas you put into it, and they come through without any problems. As long as you're enjoying writing the story, I would vote for 3. I think you could do a fine job continuing it on your own like this. If you do want to work on another story, I would also look forward to reading that. Getting a summary of the ending feels like it would be a bit sad to me. Although I am curious about the plan for the fucked up ending you mentioned above, I'd prefer to read it as a chapter if I can!

6/16/21, 10:40 PM
@drummer thank you so much, buddy! I appreciate a lot the support and encouraging words! About the ending, there's still a good part of the way to go before deciding on it. The upcoming events will guide the route to the most appropriate ending, although I should clarify that when I said "a good ending" is not exactly a 'happily ever after' ending, haha!
6/16/21, 8:23 PM
Another great installment from Wesley Bracken! This transformation is more voluntary and more loving. A nice change. I wish it wasn't a stand alone though; it would have been nice to see the cub become an acolyte and have a more complete mental and physical transformation.

6/16/21, 10:02 PM
@MrMadness I have a feeling we'll be seeing more of Alex in some later entries in the main series. The House of Brand was a concept I had very early on, and one I'm planning on incorporating as soon as I can. Though I have a feeling this is more of a prequel--we will likely next see Alex after he's progressed through another rank or two. It's a commission though! There's only so much I can get it there!