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6/16/21, 7:55 PM
Really interesting idea, but it feels underdeveloped right now. I wanted more build-up, including descriptions of the Dotters, their songs, and the whole Rainbow Station world before Mark got sucked into that world. Also, Mark's name suddenly changes to Steve in the middle of the story, then goes back to Mark.

6/16/21, 10:55 PM
@Hypnothrill Thank you for noticing, I accidentally left in the old name that I had for the character in an earlier draft! I do plan on making a sequel that explores the world of Happy Rainbow Station in a little more detail with Dave

6/17/21, 3:49 AM
@Crpal Oh good! I kept hoping that Dave would enter the story at the end.
6/17/21, 3:30 AM
That was extremely impressive. I cannot believe how highly educated and intensely hot that story was with all the many excellent descriptive words. It was more than porn and basic smut. It's just so professionally written but also just so hot in every way possible. If you had thrown in some more kink and even more dirty talk; you would have checked off most of my boxes. lol.
6/17/21, 2:57 AM
this was so good! I really hope you write more, the seed changing him was really hot! I hope you go more into that if you write a next chapter!
DB
6/17/21, 1:08 AM
great story. wanted to keep reading while stroking my own cock. I need Lex seed!
6/17/21, 12:52 AM
"“Pheromones? What the hell do pheromones have to do with anything?" Oh Javi, have a seat, we need to talk. Pheromomes have everything to do with everything. But I think Señor Hypnothrill is going to have you discover that for yourself. Or maybe by force, who knows. Either way it will be fun. Breathe deeply and I'll see you on the other side, Captain Javier Ramirez, if that remains your name.
6/17/21, 12:43 AM
this story is amazing! I cant wait for more
6/17/21, 12:09 AM
lex need more seed !!
Anonymous
6/16/21, 11:56 PM
excellent work
6/16/21, 11:51 PM
So hot!! I was stoned the first time I read this, and man did it hit different 😅 thanks for posting! Would love to read more chapters.
6/16/21, 7:16 PM
For sure keep writing! Either if you continue this or start a new story I love what you have so far and will always be a fan if you continue something new and have your sights set on other heroes! I love this chapters like the others but if you're feeling iffy about it maybe take a break write another story and then come back? up to you though what ever you write ill support it because its too hot not too haha. I also agree with the poster above. If you were to look into other heroes to write about I would love to see one about the Young Justice members. I would love to see what you would have in store for someone like Superboy and Kid flash!

6/16/21, 10:55 PM
@AxelCyclone Awww, buddy, thank you so much for your nice words! for a guy giving his first steps on writing, is very encouraging to read that. I'll go ahead with GL, but after reading the comments, I think I'll start to think on something for Kid Flash and Young Justice. I just need to find a good scenario for it. Thank you!

6/16/21, 11:13 PM
@Plymouth58 You got this! And I couldn't even tell that it was your first steps. looks more like you've already done your first mile haha. excited to see you continue the GL story and if you ever want to brain storm some ideas for the YJ story or toss some ideas around let me know! i love talking about possible stories and it usually ends up making me want to write up some stories as well. Have a good day!