Recent Comments

6/16/21, 6:41 PM
The Caesar is still relevant! I was expecting him to become a nameless soldier. Nice to see he still has a arc and a purpose. Darius took everyone by surprise! Really interested in how the snake god is going to manage anything. If this story is like part 1 and 2, we're roughly at the mid-way point. Yet, the pharaoh is winning by a landslide for now.
6/16/21, 5:36 PM
Wonderful story!
Anonymous
6/16/21, 4:39 PM
Absolutely fantastic story! It just gets better with each part!
6/16/21, 3:55 PM
That was a hot twist on the idea of a gamble that goes wrong. Loved the comedy elements too!
6/16/21, 3:25 PM
just loved this story. I would like if possible to see a chapter where the professors and camp police / security are enslaved as drones as well
6/16/21, 8:59 AM
more please

6/16/21, 1:18 PM
@Heiwoso I'd give more if i had any idea what happens when two Preds try to swallow each other!
6/16/21, 10:22 AM
nice
6/16/21, 8:29 AM
Very hot stuff! I love the part where Jack gets subdued.
Ronald
6/16/21, 7:48 AM
Hi swizz, Really enjoyed this different story. Are you thinking of posting anything new soon?