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Anonymous
6/16/21, 9:35 PM
This was hot! Really looking forward to the next part
6/16/21, 9:06 PM
one of the best stories on here in a while!
6/15/21, 9:34 PM
You made a mistake on the hand; Big Slick (A-K) with A-A-K on the board makes a boat (full house) of Aces over Kings. It does ruin the magic of the story; if he had pocket 9s it would be better as it might disguise the strength of the hand. But with the Ace in the hand, 2 on the board, and 2 in Devlin's hand, it reveals the rigged game but there's no response from the players who keep playing.

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6/15/21, 10:00 PM
@New Guy in Town I knew I was going to fuck something up with the poker hands. We'll see if anyone else spots it, if so I'll go back and edit it somehow.

Anonymous
6/15/21, 10:09 PM
@New Guy in Town Oh, I see now. I misread my own notes.George should have dealt A, 9, 3 on the flop, followed by a King on both the turn and the river. I'll edit it when I get home.

6/15/21, 10:25 PM
@The Author this makes a little more sense. WHOOPS ignore my comment if you see the original, editing to say that A93KK as the board with Hank holding AK and Devlin holding AA works, Devlin wins with a better full house. I interpreted New Guy in Town's first comment to be a suggestion of Devlin still winning with a 4-of-a-kind, by holding a 99 and changing the board somewhat.

6/15/21, 10:45 PM
@Razz TFs I should have just had the play Baccarat. No one knows how the hell to play that.

6/16/21, 5:45 AM
@New Guy in Town Is this better? George deals a K, 9, 3, followed by an Ace and another King. This gives Hank 3K/2A but gives Devlin (who pulled 2 Aces) 3A/2K, which is a better hand

6/16/21, 7:53 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Yeah, I completely overlooked this when I typed my comment; once I finished posting and walked away I realized that it would lead to a boat vs boat situation. Forgive me, I'm a stud player and am seriously not a fan of Hold'em and the whole Hold'em boom. I personally would've made them play Ohama where hands change so rapidly, but that's me.

6/16/21, 8:32 PM
@New Guy in Town LOL. I'm not a poker player at all, tbh. But the challenge was "high stakes" and I couldn't think of a premise outside of poker.
Anonymous
6/16/21, 8:10 PM
Spectacular work thanks
6/16/21, 7:25 AM
Thanks to everyone for the kind words! At least one more chapter to come soon!

Anonymous
6/16/21, 8:04 PM
@StageShowMM Will you be bringing the Mike story here?
6/16/21, 7:50 PM
This is one of those stories where I'd just like to keep reading... oh the agony you put us through! Not a lot of authors can capture me like that, but you always get me invested in your stories! (and you guarantee a good wank)
6/13/21, 5:06 PM
Just last night I said to myself that I'll write you today to also post this story on this site! Glad to see it here!

6/16/21, 7:10 PM
@scudder Thanks! I had been intending to post it for a while, but I had been postponing it, but here we are!
Conversion Enthusiast
6/16/21, 7:01 PM
The tension builds again! I feel like I need to paste all the stories into a word doc so I can read it sequentially again!
6/16/21, 6:55 PM
I wonder how the alpha drone came to be like how he discovered he was a rubber drone?
Spiral Fan
6/16/21, 6:54 PM
Oh god so Hot!! I cum so much! please write more about C'you and Jutah. they're so hot together. I also want to see The Great One have another godly fucked with God of Sun or other gods. please update more regularly!