Recent Comments

6/16/21, 12:03 AM
I always love your transformation stories and you always have the right outcome for the right scenario. And your resistance is Goldilocks...not too much, not too little, just perfect. And that pic of Kyle was hot! I'd love to play Dad/son with him.
6/15/21, 10:30 PM
AWOOOOOOOOGA. I read this on the subway--let's just say I'm glad I have bags covering my lower body. :p What a story! I love the mindless mantras, the total surrender of thought and free will...it's amazing.
6/15/21, 7:12 PM
I really love this story! I'm so excited to see more stories with the tickling tag here! It made it especially hot and i hope we get more stories that feature Devlin and his nefarious tickling fetish hah
6/15/21, 11:36 AM
i think you can keep going i don't see any problem with the story so far i think it's still keeps up with the previous chapter if you're willing to do other stories will be interesting if you do something with kid flash and some of the young justice members

6/15/21, 4:53 PM
@RedEnd thank you so much, buddy! I'll keep in mind Kid Flash for another story, what kinks would you like to see explored on a story stared by him? thanks for the suggestion!

6/15/21, 6:34 PM
@Plymouth58 **maybe something like the mad hatter is a on the loose and the young justice were sign to find him and his stolen nanotechnology and kid flash got ambition . brainwash ?**
6/15/21, 5:53 PM
I am so excited to see what will happen on Friday!
6/15/21, 5:29 PM
This is the hottest story I've read on this site in a long time. I hope there's more.
Trancer2412
6/15/21, 5:18 PM
Love your work especially about Mike
6/15/21, 1:44 PM
continue writing! this is gold!

6/15/21, 4:54 PM
@Erratic101 Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying with this story. Those encouraging words are gold for me, amigo!
6/15/21, 11:40 AM
3. continue writing dude. i know ur worried abt a quality shift but think abt it instead as practice.

6/15/21, 4:53 PM
@Badusername Thanks for the support, pal, I'll do!
Mitchell Morris
6/15/21, 3:32 PM
Really enjoyed this! You've got a fantastic eye for detail, and Mark's amoral sadism really hit that sweet spot for me. Loved the gaslighting, as well as the individual reactions from members of the crowd, and the intimations that poor Todd's changes are just beginning, perhaps altering his personality in ways more than just temporary (although that might just be wishful thinking on my part). I also really enjoyed the alternating points of view, and I felt that your establishment of Mark's character/past was very well done. "Mark-sexual" was a very deft touch, in particular - it immediately communicated what kind of guy Todd was dealing with - even if Todd himself was oblivious to the threat, and it also made me chuckle. As it stands, this reads as complete to me - you have a full arc from induction to wakening, but I could also see it continuing and branching out to several different possibilities after the show. I will definitely be looking forward to more of your work!