Recent Comments

6/15/21, 5:29 PM
This is the hottest story I've read on this site in a long time. I hope there's more.
Trancer2412
6/15/21, 5:18 PM
Love your work especially about Mike
6/15/21, 1:44 PM
continue writing! this is gold!

6/15/21, 4:54 PM
@Erratic101 Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying with this story. Those encouraging words are gold for me, amigo!
6/15/21, 11:40 AM
3. continue writing dude. i know ur worried abt a quality shift but think abt it instead as practice.

6/15/21, 4:53 PM
@Badusername Thanks for the support, pal, I'll do!
Mitchell Morris
6/15/21, 3:32 PM
Really enjoyed this! You've got a fantastic eye for detail, and Mark's amoral sadism really hit that sweet spot for me. Loved the gaslighting, as well as the individual reactions from members of the crowd, and the intimations that poor Todd's changes are just beginning, perhaps altering his personality in ways more than just temporary (although that might just be wishful thinking on my part). I also really enjoyed the alternating points of view, and I felt that your establishment of Mark's character/past was very well done. "Mark-sexual" was a very deft touch, in particular - it immediately communicated what kind of guy Todd was dealing with - even if Todd himself was oblivious to the threat, and it also made me chuckle. As it stands, this reads as complete to me - you have a full arc from induction to wakening, but I could also see it continuing and branching out to several different possibilities after the show. I will definitely be looking forward to more of your work!
6/15/21, 3:28 PM
Excellent work! Hope to see what happens to John, Tyrone and Frankie!
firesix
6/15/21, 3:14 PM
I loved this story and think you did a fantastic job. I'm eager to see what author you are since whoever you are, I'm going to need to check out the rest of your stories! The realism of a bunch of homophobic men playing spin the bottle is iffy, but I agree with Footnotized that maybe the bottle's magic extends further than is explicitly mentioned. I'd buy that. But, hell, even if I didn't, the story is so well-written and hot that I don't care. Great job :-)
6/15/21, 2:17 PM
What about helping one of the guys with somoe family issue? Like making the famil3 more accepting of his sexually?

6/15/21, 2:30 PM
Well I will have to go back and see how I left my story. Currently my focus has been on my Hybridization series. I hope to eventually find a way to wrap up some of my unfinished stories@darkblade2814

6/15/21, 2:32 PM
@ArdanWolfe no probelem

6/15/21, 2:43 PM
Unfortunately as a writer that is problem...I get all kinds of ideas and then start a new project. I know I should go back and wrap some up, just gotta find the time between work and classes not much to be had. @darkblade2814

6/15/21, 2:56 PM
@ArdanWolfe I'm on my last year of college, I understand, I am getting back to writting now, as I am in the last two weeks of the first term
6/15/21, 2:16 PM
Since this is a story about magic and mind control I can fully believe that the very site of the bottle gets the others to be "ok" with playing the game so that wasn't a huge leap for me, personally. I REALLY enjoyed the foot stuff that was included here. I thoroughly enjoyed the story and I really hope to see more in this series or from you in general. Especially, with some more foot fetish stuff. Thank you for sharing!
6/15/21, 2:16 PM
Looking forewords to part 3