Recent Comments

Daniel
6/15/21, 2:52 AM
better, but more detail would be great, you've obviously got an erotic imagination dude...use it ! I.J.S.
Daniel
6/15/21, 2:45 AM
great concept but a bit too perfunctory , matter of fact and quick ! The corruption and 'taking and feeding' should be much more detailed dude I.J.S.
Anonymous
1/11/19, 10:29 PM
A very sweet start. It was bold of Daniel to go after Bill's attackers being so frail. Obviously he's oblivious to sexual predators. Look forward to reading more.

Anonymous
6/15/21, 2:26 AM
litteraly like your simping for a 30 year old please back to reality@
BCG
6/15/21, 1:47 AM
The transformative power of leather and grease. CLothes do make the man!
LustyStallion
6/14/21, 10:23 PM
Epic - loved this so much!
6/14/21, 9:46 PM
This is perhaps *the* best fuck-scene I've ever read! It's incredibly hot how you describe Randy mentally melt into an eager fuck-toy, and the point where Dyl makes his virgin hole turn into a sloppy, receptive boi-cunt is incredible.
Anonymous
6/14/21, 9:20 PM
o wow, this is awesome! i can see the potential for an amazing big sub small top story here. Degradation and humiliation of the hero by Kinston the slave will make my dick so hard for sure! but hey, any direction you'll take the story, i'll give it a read. thanks for the story!!

Fear
6/14/21, 9:46 PM
yes thank you for your reply, i am working for my chapter 2 and 3 but just fall asleep earlier xD but i'm glad you are enjoy it, appreciate that @
6/14/21, 9:20 PM
Need to write review before I fall asleep. This story took a lot out of me. Several times. I need to set it aside for a bit. Thank you.
6/14/21, 7:28 PM
i still have faith the next chapter will be extra hot. Your take on humiliation is right up my ally.

Oddballs
6/14/21, 7:33 PM
@Tough Guy Takedown Next chapter? But this was only a script; it was written in hopes it can be used by ManUp Films one day. idk what I would even do for a sequel 0-0;
Kods
6/14/21, 6:13 PM
Hey do you know if you'll ever continue this, or are you waiting for someone else to pick the series up again?

6/14/21, 6:38 PM
@Kods Yes! I've been wiped out at work so I haven't had a chance to come back to this recently, I'm sad to say. I'm going to write a chapter from the perspective of one of Ethan's friends to show how a bigger hivemind can go off the rails, then I'm going to loop back to this little budding family to give them some hot time in the spotlight. I promise I haven't forgotten about it!