Recent Comments

6/15/21, 7:12 PM
I really love this story! I'm so excited to see more stories with the tickling tag here! It made it especially hot and i hope we get more stories that feature Devlin and his nefarious tickling fetish hah
6/15/21, 11:36 AM
i think you can keep going i don't see any problem with the story so far i think it's still keeps up with the previous chapter if you're willing to do other stories will be interesting if you do something with kid flash and some of the young justice members

6/15/21, 4:53 PM
@RedEnd thank you so much, buddy! I'll keep in mind Kid Flash for another story, what kinks would you like to see explored on a story stared by him? thanks for the suggestion!

6/15/21, 6:34 PM
@Plymouth58 **maybe something like the mad hatter is a on the loose and the young justice were sign to find him and his stolen nanotechnology and kid flash got ambition . brainwash ?**
6/15/21, 5:53 PM
I am so excited to see what will happen on Friday!
6/15/21, 5:29 PM
This is the hottest story I've read on this site in a long time. I hope there's more.
Trancer2412
6/15/21, 5:18 PM
Love your work especially about Mike
6/15/21, 1:44 PM
continue writing! this is gold!

6/15/21, 4:54 PM
@Erratic101 Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying with this story. Those encouraging words are gold for me, amigo!
6/15/21, 11:40 AM
3. continue writing dude. i know ur worried abt a quality shift but think abt it instead as practice.

6/15/21, 4:53 PM
@Badusername Thanks for the support, pal, I'll do!
Mitchell Morris
6/15/21, 3:32 PM
Really enjoyed this! You've got a fantastic eye for detail, and Mark's amoral sadism really hit that sweet spot for me. Loved the gaslighting, as well as the individual reactions from members of the crowd, and the intimations that poor Todd's changes are just beginning, perhaps altering his personality in ways more than just temporary (although that might just be wishful thinking on my part). I also really enjoyed the alternating points of view, and I felt that your establishment of Mark's character/past was very well done. "Mark-sexual" was a very deft touch, in particular - it immediately communicated what kind of guy Todd was dealing with - even if Todd himself was oblivious to the threat, and it also made me chuckle. As it stands, this reads as complete to me - you have a full arc from induction to wakening, but I could also see it continuing and branching out to several different possibilities after the show. I will definitely be looking forward to more of your work!
6/15/21, 3:28 PM
Excellent work! Hope to see what happens to John, Tyrone and Frankie!
firesix
6/15/21, 3:14 PM
I loved this story and think you did a fantastic job. I'm eager to see what author you are since whoever you are, I'm going to need to check out the rest of your stories! The realism of a bunch of homophobic men playing spin the bottle is iffy, but I agree with Footnotized that maybe the bottle's magic extends further than is explicitly mentioned. I'd buy that. But, hell, even if I didn't, the story is so well-written and hot that I don't care. Great job :-)