Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/13/21, 5:53 PM
This is Hot!
Anonymous
6/13/21, 5:09 PM
Hard to judge this part on its own since the main focus is on introducing the plot, rather than action. But I’m intrigued to see what you’ve got in store as things progress
6/13/21, 5:05 PM
Interesting. Nice setup. Very curious to see where you take this. Your work is, as always, a favorite of mine.
6/13/21, 5:05 PM
I'm so excited to see where this will go!
Anonymous
6/13/21, 5:00 PM
it is a really good beginning, but sadly it is again a new beginning. idk if you have not that much inspiration rn, but there are many stories that are just missing further parts. but asides from that it is a great story with a great beginning. keep going!!!
6/13/21, 4:19 PM
This seems to be exactly the same as the first chapter. Very hot but I'd really love to see more!
6/13/21, 2:18 PM
Hey, I think the story is good, but the formatting really through me off. It kind of looks like things got screwy maybe when it was copied and pasted. It was tough to read. If you can switch the bullets and dashes for quotations, it would all the difference.

6/13/21, 2:31 PM
@The Influencer Thanks for the heads up, let me see what I can do.
Mindwhisperer
6/13/21, 1:41 PM
Just an *itsy*, *bitsy* *tiny* bit of reality please.
6/13/21, 11:46 AM
Wow, I was rock hard through this story.
6/13/21, 11:26 AM
Hi, GReat story, waiting for the next installment.