Recent Comments

6/13/21, 2:29 AM
Can't wait for chapter 3 I hope it's a really long one ! : Want to see how these two dudes behavior starts to change !
6/13/21, 1:05 AM
Hit me up if you want someone to take an editing pass at the next chapter
6/13/21, 12:54 AM
This is such a great spin for a Brian Porter story! Love it!
6/12/21, 10:45 PM
so hot! please continue this, i'm really interested in seeing where Danny goes from here
6/12/21, 8:04 PM
Great writing! I hope there are more adventures ahead for Jamie...
6/12/21, 5:17 PM
Awesome story
6/12/21, 3:21 PM
I think this is a hot idea, and I'd love to see you continue. I think that either after the swim transformation or as a segue to it, showing a more intimate one-on-one scene that actually goes into the sensation of sex and attraction might be interesting and get you past your creative bloc. Maybe the rugby captain and his roommate, or a rugger with a swim team buddy that hasn't been converted yet but has secretly lusted after him without the pendant's influence for years? There's lots of options given the way you've set it up!
6/12/21, 12:26 PM
Great writing, as always! Felt like I was there in the shop, enjoying the action. Hope the next chapters get hotter and hotter...maybe a big reunion sex party with a lot of Ricky's friends!

6/12/21, 2:04 PM
@MuscleSon69 Thank you for the kind words, as always! I think you'll like what I have in mind for the reunion after party ;)
6/12/21, 2:03 PM
This story set a high bar for this contest IMO. Great read!
CLB
6/12/21, 1:54 PM
Agree with the previous comment: very hot story and i wish there were more. Side note: usually I want those orchestrating the change to win, but here i kind of want to see Chris free Matt & Jacob lol