Recent Comments

6/12/21, 3:21 PM
I think this is a hot idea, and I'd love to see you continue. I think that either after the swim transformation or as a segue to it, showing a more intimate one-on-one scene that actually goes into the sensation of sex and attraction might be interesting and get you past your creative bloc. Maybe the rugby captain and his roommate, or a rugger with a swim team buddy that hasn't been converted yet but has secretly lusted after him without the pendant's influence for years? There's lots of options given the way you've set it up!
6/12/21, 12:26 PM
Great writing, as always! Felt like I was there in the shop, enjoying the action. Hope the next chapters get hotter and hotter...maybe a big reunion sex party with a lot of Ricky's friends!

6/12/21, 2:04 PM
@MuscleSon69 Thank you for the kind words, as always! I think you'll like what I have in mind for the reunion after party ;)
6/12/21, 2:03 PM
This story set a high bar for this contest IMO. Great read!
CLB
6/12/21, 1:54 PM
Agree with the previous comment: very hot story and i wish there were more. Side note: usually I want those orchestrating the change to win, but here i kind of want to see Chris free Matt & Jacob lol
May 4, 2020
Anonymous
6/12/21, 1:02 PM
love it keep going
6/12/21, 12:57 PM
I hadn't realised that you had changed your username until I saw your post in Hypnothrill's recent story! Great to see more from you. You were one of my favourite authors growing up
6/12/21, 12:54 PM
This is very hot to see more stories from you and set in Topaz172's VT world. I really enjoyed it and hope to see more. Thank you for the story
6/12/21, 12:11 PM
Chapter 2 was even better! Kept me hard and wanting more. Ricky has a great thing with Chris and the sex keeps getting better & hotter. On to chapter 3.
6/12/21, 2:32 AM
option 3 for sure
6/11/21, 8:50 PM
this is so good, the wait was worth it! i hope to see more of coach using Chris! One request, please have him do more domestic chores, be more submissive and slave like!

6/12/21, 12:25 AM
@Erratic101 Glad you liked it! Don't worry - I think you will love what I'm thinking about for the next couple of chapters! I'm also a big fan of "domestic bliss". ;)