I'm excited hope for more of this soon :)

will you continue this one?

Love the story and with so many places you could go, very much looking forward to the next installment

my only problem... people go to doctors because they are sick. I don't look forward to people dying because that's not sexy. In a similar story a few years back there was a change that took care of illness.

Hot story! I look forward to seeing where it goes

it was pretty hot. feel bad for the brother that got turned into the dog. but damn did i beat off a lot to it.

Hot damn that was good! Hope for a sequel after the contest has wrapped up!

Pretty enjoyable, though describing a deep voice as "touching on African American" is kinda weird and took me out of it.

God this is hot. I hope there's a continuation!

HOLY CRAP I AM SORRY. i am so sorry i took so long to get around to reading this. I was wrong. I am at FAULT. I APOLOGIZE. This series is fan-fucking-tastic, the casual way that Dave takes over the team members, his passive but impressive intellect in keeping all of their roles and degrees of control straight and ensuring that none snarls with any of the other boys. The different ways that he shows ownership of each. Findom-ing Preppy, making him a man-servant, taking on Sherman's wife's role of pup owner WITHOUT ruining their marriage?! (seriously, i thought i wasn't going to like that part, but you handled it PERFECTLY with the selective amnesia.) Gerber's mostly casual foot obsession, and the absolute perfection that is Bobby's submission to dave. AND SOMEHOW YOU STILL HAVEN'T POPPED BOBBY'S CHERRY AND I AM NOT EVEN MAD! I'd be interested to see what Dave might do with Batshit, but somehow i am NOT interested in him taking full ownership of the whole team. he's right. it's problematic, and that's way too many people for him to comfortably juggle the lives of. Currently astounded that he didn't ask preppy for a card and pin like he did from Bobby, but I'm sure that Dave will get to that in time. the big romantic date is something i am looking forward to reading, as well as seeing this story continue long enough for the son (forgot his name) to come home and be brought into the fold. I'm honestly wondering about that, Would Dave still want the son after having such prime specimens? would it be more fun to make the son actually clueless, not seeing anything as sexual, having full and bland conversations with Dave while Dave is actively pounding his daddy slave over the back of the sofa that the son is sitting on while Bobby cries out like a bitch in heat? How would Dave vary the son's submission to him, should he choose to have it? you've done feet and smell, finances, service, pup play... but there are still so many options open to you!