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6/10/21, 9:27 AM
hot story
6/10/21, 5:02 AM
the chapters repeat itself and the title says "Caleb" when the son's name is "Corey" in the story. you might want to do some proofreading and editing because it's confusing as it is.

6/10/21, 8:41 AM
@Somnius I never would have noticed that. Cheers!
6/10/21, 8:21 AM
Reading the above comments, I agree that there was a bit too many gaps especially for a longer story. It felt more like a disjointed prologue that suddenly jumped to the epilogue than a story. I can see the world branching into other stories but to me, part of reading a story is I want an author to paint a picture, rather than make it feel like the author wants the reader to grasp blindly for scenes, more so when there are tags that give idea of seeing things like the straight to gay, more than a couple sentences of beastality sorta thing. It was very well written even disjointed as it felt
6/10/21, 8:16 AM
Very kinky, hot and gentle as always. I especially liked the further explanation about the T-drones their crotch cover and that they are not always wearing boots. Thank you so much!
Feb 1, 2021
JAY-JAY
6/10/21, 6:39 AM
Love this story. Could definitely have a part 2.
Kent
6/10/21, 6:20 AM
option 2!
6/10/21, 1:44 AM
very hot story and love the ending

6/10/21, 5:53 AM
@Benv Thanks so much.
6/10/21, 2:56 AM
Very sexy, and for a first time poster i thought you'd been at this for ages. Slightly hoping for one last steamy scene in the last bit but that's probably just me.

6/10/21, 5:51 AM
@Przypomnienie Thanks for the opinion. I'm not going to waste a scene with that potential on something hot. I am writing next chapter. It's not end a story.
6/10/21, 5:25 AM
options 1 or 3 are my favorites