Recent Comments

6/10/21, 2:56 AM
Very sexy, and for a first time poster i thought you'd been at this for ages. Slightly hoping for one last steamy scene in the last bit but that's probably just me.

6/10/21, 5:51 AM
@Przypomnienie Thanks for the opinion. I'm not going to waste a scene with that potential on something hot. I am writing next chapter. It's not end a story.
6/10/21, 5:25 AM
options 1 or 3 are my favorites
Zac
6/9/21, 11:08 PM
HOT! Is this the same "Master Talon" from (who wrote...?) the ["Voodoo Tattoo"](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/475833) stories?

6/10/21, 5:01 AM
@Zac Yes, technically, although Topaz172 takes the character in a new direction and on a wild ride in the "Various Techniques" series (https://mcstories.com/VariousTechniques/index.html) where he first shows up in Chapter 5, and especially in the sequel "Talon's Claws" (https://mcstories.com/TalonsClaws/index.html). My story is riffing on the magical induction scenes we see in detail in Chapters 5 and 6 of "Talon's Claws."
6/10/21, 4:29 AM
Love this chapter. For the options for next week, Option 2 appeals the most, but all of them will be fun.
6/10/21, 4:26 AM
A great spread of the gayness to all the players and coaches.
6/10/21, 3:16 AM
i remember this story fondly back at mcstories. glad to see it here again so i can save it.
Average gay enjoyer
6/10/21, 12:59 AM
There should be some role reversal, its always lame to see the tormentor get away Scott free. Maybe Kent somehow gets the pendant again and Henry becomes the main slave for everyone, idk, wherever the story goes it seems interesting.
Anonymous
6/10/21, 12:20 AM
I hope you will write the next chapter soon
Anonymous
6/9/21, 10:27 PM
Great story! Can't wait to see where this goes!
Anonymous
6/9/21, 10:26 PM
Your stories never disappoint! I can't wait to read the next part!