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7/21/21, 8:21 PM
This is a kind of story I absolutely love, but selfishly, I wanted you to slow down and flesh out some of the details of the mental transformations. I hope you write more stories in this vein, but just pace them a bit differently, to give us time to get to know the characters and get into their heads a little bit more.

7/21/21, 9:26 PM
@Hypnothrill thanks for the feedback! This was my first time putting pen to paper all these infections I've had in my head for so long. Maybe next time I'll focus more intimately on just a few characters to add more depth to each character's takeover.
7/21/21, 9:13 PM
I like how it's not everything go as planed, while the doctor were in control (of Brendan), there are still things he can't control and was pushed to go deeper then he planed.
7/21/21, 8:20 PM
This story should continue. It did leave us at the end of this part here.
7/21/21, 8:00 PM
Fun, neat story! Solid entry to the contest :)
7/21/21, 6:51 PM
Lets change the faculty a bit as well
AAA
7/21/21, 5:36 AM
I'm liking the friendliness of the two main chars and well... a fair amount of the fics here have cruel undertones. This does not feel like that. Which is nice and stuff.

7/21/21, 2:12 PM
@AAA I liked it to but disagree about the dark undertones. The part where Gabe goes “It’s the rules that make the game fun,” Gabe said in a funny voice. seem to hint that Gabe has ulterior motives at least

7/21/21, 6:51 PM
@maggiemee88 ulterior motives doesn't means malicous, could be just mischevieuness
7/21/21, 5:07 PM
Wow! What a hot story. I was so sad to see the end, can't wait for more!
7/21/21, 4:35 PM
so hot. I truly love this story. keep it up.
7/21/21, 4:00 PM
Do you mean "a hundred score" as in 100, 1000, or 100 "scores" which equals 2000?
7/20/21, 8:18 PM
The fun just keeps getting better! Let us continue to tour the office with Leo and find out what other interesting buddy pairs there are. Actual gay guys? Family or relatives? Since the modifications changed their entire life, not just the office life, it'd be interesting to see how these people's lives would've been changed as a result. Also, you mentioned in the comments above that the idea of this was initiated by the impersonal "Company", so I wonder if we would also get to see how the higher management levels get integrated into the buddy system as well. For example, would that affect the power balance of the CEO if he was budding with the VP/CFO/COO/etc...? I also hope we'll get to the corporate retreat as well. Looking forward to the next part as usual! Please keep them coming, Hypnothrill! ;)

7/20/21, 8:33 PM
@tomozco Good questions! And ones that won't get answered in the final two chapters LOL! But if I ever get around to writing a sequel, those are all aspects of this universe that I might end up exploring.

7/21/21, 3:44 PM
@Hypnothrill Well I sure hope you'll get motivated enough to create a sequel some time....I think I could wish that for many of your stories as well! ;)