Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/9/21, 10:26 PM
Your stories never disappoint! I can't wait to read the next part!
6/9/21, 7:03 PM
I thought this was still really hot! I just wanted to see more about Chris's interactions with his teammates, how the rest of the team got reprogrammed, and how Coach Paul now interacted with his swimmer son Howie.
6/9/21, 6:41 PM
Another great story by Mr. Porter! Loved the POV's back and forth, especialy because you rarely show the Top's POV, guess you only did with Karl before. And speaking of him, the cameos featuring was cute haha I notice that you breaging more and more woman to your stories, don't know how to feel about it, but i guess they are a good plot resource. Anyway, keep up with the good work, love ya
Anonymous
6/9/21, 4:04 PM
Eerie and erotic [eerotic?], a chilling concept with a superb execution that straddles horror with horniness, will be eagerly anticipating the future installments
6/9/21, 3:20 PM
Second Person writing is rare and it takes writing skills to pull it off while at the same time telling a compelling story. Your talent needs to put itself to work on a part two. Whatever, it's a well crafted piece of work.
6/9/21, 3:09 PM
this is going to be sweet
Alex Lat
6/9/21, 2:23 PM
option 1!!
6/9/21, 2:19 PM
Maaan i have had this bookmarked, and i just keep coming back to this for many a nights! The way you describe the bond, how the seal cum physically binds them together. One solid story! You've gained a fan here.
Jack
6/9/21, 1:10 PM
Why did you stop writing this series?! It's so hot and well-written. Please, man! Keep up this story!
6/9/21, 8:51 AM
I'm not a rubber person, but I still really enjoyed this. It's fun to see how the premise and even the characterizations change from author to author, like a game of telephone. In the original story and my adaptation of it, Marcus was kind of a "go with the flow" popular jock guy, a total "bro" who easily conforms to the new reality. When I invented his friend Andy, I imagined a similar "bro" type. So I'm fascinated by how different this story's take on Marcus is; he's blushing all the time, and he's described as a "very smart bookworm." I guess it's because he's now being used as the author/reader identification figure, rather than as a foil for the protagonist.