Recent Comments

6/8/21, 5:20 PM
I always look out for New Chapter of this story, Yet again you have not disappointed. Glad the Daniel has got to the point where he now knows he is the Sheriff. (the past 2 chapters have been worth the wait). And I really loved where his deputies chastised him as he was in the wrong uniform, Of course its right that the Sheriff wear a different type of uniform, and Yes its right that as he is a "Daddy" it's a leather one. Like the surprise at the end where, papa is Billy Bonkers
6/8/21, 2:10 PM
Every chapter I read makes me feel like I'm on more drugs. I mean I love the story but it is very much confusing at points

6/8/21, 5:09 PM
@salty_binch I'd love to hear more. For me, the story makes complete sense, but that's how my brain works. Is it a plot issue, or a descriptive one, or character motivation?
Apr 11, 2021
Anonymous
6/8/21, 5:00 PM
I'd love to see this be continued! 😍
6/8/21, 6:14 AM
That was brilliant.

6/8/21, 5:00 PM
@Lacerator thank you!
Jun 7, 2021
6/8/21, 10:11 AM
great story, I really liked the premise always been a desire of mine to be whisked away and turned into a clown. more clown stories please

6/8/21, 4:11 PM
same!@Defy
6/8/21, 3:03 PM
Kept my interest going beginning to end! From part 1 thru 3. You have a way of making it all seem so natural. Hope you keep it going ! More MORE MORE Continue!
Jun 4, 2021
6/8/21, 2:34 PM
this is genuinely incredible. i can't wait for more from you!
Mikeinlth
6/8/21, 1:18 PM
****
Anonymous
6/8/21, 1:13 PM
good work
6/8/21, 11:53 AM
Fun story. Interesting to see how he's making changes in VR that he's then using irl without dad knowing. Looking forward to the next one!