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6/8/21, 6:14 AM
That was brilliant.

6/8/21, 5:00 PM
@Lacerator thank you!
Jun 7, 2021
6/8/21, 10:11 AM
great story, I really liked the premise always been a desire of mine to be whisked away and turned into a clown. more clown stories please

6/8/21, 4:11 PM
same!@Defy
6/8/21, 3:03 PM
Kept my interest going beginning to end! From part 1 thru 3. You have a way of making it all seem so natural. Hope you keep it going ! More MORE MORE Continue!
Jun 4, 2021
6/8/21, 2:34 PM
this is genuinely incredible. i can't wait for more from you!
Mikeinlth
6/8/21, 1:18 PM
****
Anonymous
6/8/21, 1:13 PM
good work
6/8/21, 11:53 AM
Fun story. Interesting to see how he's making changes in VR that he's then using irl without dad knowing. Looking forward to the next one!
Jun 8, 2021
6/8/21, 11:20 AM
Great, fun little story. The more you go into it, the more you wanted to see what's next. More chapters?
6/8/21, 11:20 AM
I vote option 2
6/8/21, 11:02 AM
One of the best things i have read in this site, if not the best.