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6/8/21, 1:03 AM
Me encantó muy Original y Exitante
6/8/21, 12:45 AM
What a sweet, wonderfully written story! I enjoyed it immensely.
6/8/21, 12:31 AM
The transformation of the cops was hot as hell!! What a dream come true...nothaving to decide which uniform to submit to if ever presented the chance. And Robb got every single one. The forest ranger made my heart skip at the very mention.
6/7/21, 11:06 PM
Love this chapter. I really like how you made the coach go from what he thought he was an alpha male to a cockless whore. Can't wait to see what you do to the rest of the players or the bus driver.
5/24/21, 10:27 PM
Please continue this! I love this series and want to see where it's going next 🙌

5/25/21, 8:30 AM
Hi, @Curiosity ! Thanks for your comments! You have no idea how much it means to me to know you're still interested in this little story.  Thank you very much! I'm happy to say that I was finally able to finish the chapter. And my God, it is a total behemoth, the longest of the series, by far!  I just have to make a last check up, and then pass it to a friend to check the grammar and the dialogues. I'll upload it as soon as possible. Hopefully, I'll post it before the end of the week!

Chase
6/6/21, 4:41 AM
I can't wait! @Plymouth58

6/6/21, 9:08 PM
@Chase @Curiosity The revision is taking longer than what I expected, given the monster size of this particular chapter. The original draft is almost 23,000 words! which is more than the first 5 chapters together!!!! I tried to divide it in two parts, but couldn't find a suitable point to cut it and still keep it interesting. Then I tried to simplify it, but there was so much to cover ha, ha! Also, the guy who's helping me to review it is not as enthusiastic of MC as me, so it's taking a time, but it's coming for sure.

6/7/21, 10:26 PM
@Plymouth58 YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
6/7/21, 10:11 PM
great job on part two, been waiting anxiously for it. really liked part where they had to yell out when cumming, hope that plays into other parts. I vote for option 2
Laharl
6/7/21, 10:06 PM
Can we vote next week option? Obviously it must be B.
6/7/21, 10:01 PM
hurry up, I'm waiting! more already! there's so many ways this can go ! The Adventures of Max !
6/7/21, 9:49 PM
i'm liking option 2!
Anonymous
6/7/21, 9:36 PM
Great story, I would like to see the option three