Recent Comments

6/7/21, 2:29 PM
This is so hot. This last chapter I got way more into than I thought I would. I would love to see all three options. And I think that the order in which these occur will affect what the characters learn and accept about themselves and each other. I love it. My vote is to keep going.
6/7/21, 2:01 PM
I echo ruffcub's sentiment. I found it very well written and an ideal length. I especially liked how you incorporated multiple fetishes and set it up for a possible future chapter with more incest. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
6/7/21, 1:49 PM
its kinda weird but im loving it
6/7/21, 1:38 PM
it's 3 or 4 down now?
6/7/21, 12:10 PM
Well done on a great story for the contest. I really enjoyed it, especially the twist at the end.
Anonymous
6/7/21, 11:59 AM
Generally well written, but I’m not sure how much I buy into the core concept. You spend so much time setting up how much anti-gay sentiment there is within the community, but then the guys all just agree to the game with no real stakes or manipulation
Anonymous
6/7/21, 11:57 AM
this is as I predicted in the first section, it was the boss!
CigarMuscle
6/7/21, 11:28 AM
Amazing work all around!
6/7/21, 11:17 AM
Holy shit dude, this is great work. I'm excited to see what comes up next and the evolving drama of the frat's dynamics is great to read. I'm excited to see this "House Alpha" proposal play out, even if it's not in your next chapter.
6/7/21, 10:34 AM
that was very hot! really glad the coach was turned to a "gamma" was not enjoying how he was an alpha before lol I wanna see what the driver do with the key in the human world. I kinda have an idea of what it does. Tho maybe you'll write a different series for that? anyway, thanks for you raunchy writing xoxo