Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/7/21, 4:49 PM
This is getting so much hotter with each installment! I'm definitely voting for option A, I always love seeing hot himbos and the permanent effect is just the icing on top.
6/7/21, 3:08 PM
I believe it is 3.
6/7/21, 2:29 PM
This is so hot. This last chapter I got way more into than I thought I would. I would love to see all three options. And I think that the order in which these occur will affect what the characters learn and accept about themselves and each other. I love it. My vote is to keep going.
6/7/21, 2:01 PM
I echo ruffcub's sentiment. I found it very well written and an ideal length. I especially liked how you incorporated multiple fetishes and set it up for a possible future chapter with more incest. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
6/7/21, 1:49 PM
its kinda weird but im loving it
6/7/21, 1:38 PM
it's 3 or 4 down now?
6/7/21, 12:10 PM
Well done on a great story for the contest. I really enjoyed it, especially the twist at the end.
Anonymous
6/7/21, 11:59 AM
Generally well written, but I’m not sure how much I buy into the core concept. You spend so much time setting up how much anti-gay sentiment there is within the community, but then the guys all just agree to the game with no real stakes or manipulation
Anonymous
6/7/21, 11:57 AM
this is as I predicted in the first section, it was the boss!
CigarMuscle
6/7/21, 11:28 AM
Amazing work all around!