Recent Comments

6/4/21, 5:28 AM
First time reading the story and so far...it's fucking awesome! If only the juice was available. I get into your stories really fast, thanks to your descriptive writing. It's like I'm there in the gym, surrounded by all of those muscle studs with their thick packages. When they get hard, so do I. Your words kept me rock hard & leaking the whole time. In a word...Thanks! On to next chapter and some release!
6/4/21, 5:08 AM
It was a privlage to help edit this story. I honestly felt this story was so well done to show the point of view of the mage. I continue to feel blessed by the works of the Mind Labyrinth. May they keep writing and creating wonderful worlds.

6/4/21, 5:11 AM
@Drake Nightstorm *sniffs* this is such a lovely comment i might tear up! thank you so much for your help with getting the issues shaken out of this chapter.
6/4/21, 3:37 AM
Trigger might be my favorite villain ever in one of these stories. I loved it.
6/4/21, 12:44 AM
A five rating in every category! Very hot. You did the pit licking so well. I could smell and taste it myself. Gerald and Benny scene was dick growing. And the added neanderthal talk, "lick pit" "bring boy" etc. added a hot primal feel. Grrwoof, sweaty hairy dark pit, two days since last cleaning, pheromone filled, please. Make it two.

6/4/21, 2:20 AM
Oh the good times will definitely be continued in the bar 😉@PupScout
Mat
6/4/21, 1:10 AM
Another superb Brian Porter story! Your stories are addictive and make me cum so much. So hot!
6/3/21, 11:56 PM
Would you consider expanding this into a series after the contest has ended? It is an intriguing concept, and I would love to read more!

6/4/21, 1:08 AM
@Niemand63 I've been thinking of doing a fantasy series, but this isn't it. In theory, I could probably merge them somehow, but I'd have to explain away how the commoners here either don't know about magic or at least don't think about it, compared to the fantasy world I want to write, where nearly everyone has at least some small magical ability.
6/4/21, 12:53 AM
cant wait to read more
6/4/21, 12:44 AM
love pri would like to read more.... ^3^
6/3/21, 4:33 AM
Amazing set-up of an super-hot predicament!

6/3/21, 10:07 PM
Thanks @FreeThinker! I hope you enjoy the rest of the series. This is one of the ones I’m proudest about.
6/3/21, 4:21 AM
This is easily one of the best stories I've read in the genre! The writing is awesome. And the events, as they unfold, get better and better. Dumbing down is totally *not* one of my go-to turn-ons, and, yet, the dumbing-down moment had me totally hard! Awesome work, Derek!

6/3/21, 10:06 PM
Thanks @FreeThinker! I’m a big fan of dumbing down, and you’ll find an element of it in most of my stories, but the central focus here is definitely on vanity and ambition and irony.