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6/4/21, 3:37 AM
Trigger might be my favorite villain ever in one of these stories. I loved it.
6/4/21, 12:44 AM
A five rating in every category! Very hot. You did the pit licking so well. I could smell and taste it myself. Gerald and Benny scene was dick growing. And the added neanderthal talk, "lick pit" "bring boy" etc. added a hot primal feel. Grrwoof, sweaty hairy dark pit, two days since last cleaning, pheromone filled, please. Make it two.

6/4/21, 2:20 AM
Oh the good times will definitely be continued in the bar 😉@PupScout
Mat
6/4/21, 1:10 AM
Another superb Brian Porter story! Your stories are addictive and make me cum so much. So hot!
6/3/21, 11:56 PM
Would you consider expanding this into a series after the contest has ended? It is an intriguing concept, and I would love to read more!

6/4/21, 1:08 AM
@Niemand63 I've been thinking of doing a fantasy series, but this isn't it. In theory, I could probably merge them somehow, but I'd have to explain away how the commoners here either don't know about magic or at least don't think about it, compared to the fantasy world I want to write, where nearly everyone has at least some small magical ability.
6/4/21, 12:53 AM
cant wait to read more
6/4/21, 12:44 AM
love pri would like to read more.... ^3^
6/3/21, 4:33 AM
Amazing set-up of an super-hot predicament!

6/3/21, 10:07 PM
Thanks @FreeThinker! I hope you enjoy the rest of the series. This is one of the ones I’m proudest about.
6/3/21, 4:21 AM
This is easily one of the best stories I've read in the genre! The writing is awesome. And the events, as they unfold, get better and better. Dumbing down is totally *not* one of my go-to turn-ons, and, yet, the dumbing-down moment had me totally hard! Awesome work, Derek!

6/3/21, 10:06 PM
Thanks @FreeThinker! I’m a big fan of dumbing down, and you’ll find an element of it in most of my stories, but the central focus here is definitely on vanity and ambition and irony.
6/3/21, 1:13 AM
Half-Heartily tastes the rice and makes a gag face .2 seconds *before* it even touches my tastebuds Powers through... ...Good story (this is an injoke)

6/3/21, 9:52 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Hahaha! If you think rice is bad, try rice cakes! Now, those'll make you want to make the gag face! Seriously, though, thanks for the compliment!
Anonymous
6/3/21, 4:25 PM
I like the concept, but the ending seemed a little rushed. You spend so much time building a carefully crafted world, and we then get just a handful of paragraphs devoted to the climax (pun intended). Maybe it would have worked better as the start of a series, rather than being pushed down the one-shot route that these challenges require?

Anonymous
6/3/21, 9:43 PM
This comment amuses me from the perspective that, not knowing who I am, you have successfully identified me as an author who usually writes series and isn't very good at one-offs. Truth be told, I knew when I submitted it that this wasn't my best work, but I've never done a challenge before, so I thought I'd dip my toes in the water.