Recent Comments

6/3/21, 4:33 AM
Amazing set-up of an super-hot predicament!

6/3/21, 10:07 PM
Thanks @FreeThinker! I hope you enjoy the rest of the series. This is one of the ones I’m proudest about.
6/3/21, 4:21 AM
This is easily one of the best stories I've read in the genre! The writing is awesome. And the events, as they unfold, get better and better. Dumbing down is totally *not* one of my go-to turn-ons, and, yet, the dumbing-down moment had me totally hard! Awesome work, Derek!

6/3/21, 10:06 PM
Thanks @FreeThinker! I’m a big fan of dumbing down, and you’ll find an element of it in most of my stories, but the central focus here is definitely on vanity and ambition and irony.
6/3/21, 1:13 AM
Half-Heartily tastes the rice and makes a gag face .2 seconds *before* it even touches my tastebuds Powers through... ...Good story (this is an injoke)

6/3/21, 9:52 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Hahaha! If you think rice is bad, try rice cakes! Now, those'll make you want to make the gag face! Seriously, though, thanks for the compliment!
Anonymous
6/3/21, 4:25 PM
I like the concept, but the ending seemed a little rushed. You spend so much time building a carefully crafted world, and we then get just a handful of paragraphs devoted to the climax (pun intended). Maybe it would have worked better as the start of a series, rather than being pushed down the one-shot route that these challenges require?

Anonymous
6/3/21, 9:43 PM
This comment amuses me from the perspective that, not knowing who I am, you have successfully identified me as an author who usually writes series and isn't very good at one-offs. Truth be told, I knew when I submitted it that this wasn't my best work, but I've never done a challenge before, so I thought I'd dip my toes in the water.
6/3/21, 8:58 PM
I love it! The humiliation is great and the dumbing down parts are so good and hot, and I loved the additions that Charlie and Will give to Barry’s mindfucked head. It’s the first story I found stared by The Flash it was a very nice surprise! Would be great to have some sort of sequel. By the way, I saw your drawing on your twitter account, and I think its great! I’m gonna take a look at your other stories, and I hope you decide to make another incursion into the superheroes genre. Best regards!
Anonymous
6/3/21, 6:46 PM
Another great work from the moist!
6/3/21, 6:28 PM
Love this
Anonymous
6/3/21, 6:27 PM
Love this series! Still waiting for a continuation.
6/3/21, 6:19 PM
Hot concept and I'm enjoying the conversions so far. Definitely a good, slow burn, and you have a good handle on identities and outlooks for your characters and how they're going to change. It could use some editing and formatting - not sure if you're a native English writer. Reach out if you'd like some advice!
6/3/21, 6:00 PM
Excellent! I hope Trigger will make a reappearance in front of some other DC heroes.