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6/3/21, 1:13 AM
Half-Heartily tastes the rice and makes a gag face .2 seconds *before* it even touches my tastebuds Powers through... ...Good story (this is an injoke)

6/3/21, 9:52 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Hahaha! If you think rice is bad, try rice cakes! Now, those'll make you want to make the gag face! Seriously, though, thanks for the compliment!
Anonymous
6/3/21, 4:25 PM
I like the concept, but the ending seemed a little rushed. You spend so much time building a carefully crafted world, and we then get just a handful of paragraphs devoted to the climax (pun intended). Maybe it would have worked better as the start of a series, rather than being pushed down the one-shot route that these challenges require?

Anonymous
6/3/21, 9:43 PM
This comment amuses me from the perspective that, not knowing who I am, you have successfully identified me as an author who usually writes series and isn't very good at one-offs. Truth be told, I knew when I submitted it that this wasn't my best work, but I've never done a challenge before, so I thought I'd dip my toes in the water.
6/3/21, 8:58 PM
I love it! The humiliation is great and the dumbing down parts are so good and hot, and I loved the additions that Charlie and Will give to Barry’s mindfucked head. It’s the first story I found stared by The Flash it was a very nice surprise! Would be great to have some sort of sequel. By the way, I saw your drawing on your twitter account, and I think its great! I’m gonna take a look at your other stories, and I hope you decide to make another incursion into the superheroes genre. Best regards!
Anonymous
6/3/21, 6:46 PM
Another great work from the moist!
6/3/21, 6:28 PM
Love this
Anonymous
6/3/21, 6:27 PM
Love this series! Still waiting for a continuation.
6/3/21, 6:19 PM
Hot concept and I'm enjoying the conversions so far. Definitely a good, slow burn, and you have a good handle on identities and outlooks for your characters and how they're going to change. It could use some editing and formatting - not sure if you're a native English writer. Reach out if you'd like some advice!
6/3/21, 6:00 PM
Excellent! I hope Trigger will make a reappearance in front of some other DC heroes.
6/3/21, 7:47 AM
WóÓÔÒòF! Neanderthal Daddy Bear! 🐻 As always, a delightful read! 😁

6/3/21, 11:17 AM
Haha well there's definitely more Neanderthals on the way 😁@Papa Werebear