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oxly
6/2/21, 2:14 PM
wow!! awesome story from start to finish!! i really loved the reveal at the end too! its a little tricky knowing who's talking at times, but other than that i only wish there was more to read! excellent job!!
boi98229
5/31/21, 1:44 AM
Thanks so much for a really hot story. I thought at first the psychologist would end up working in concert with Matt, and i would have been perfectly happy with that outcome. The path you chose was every bit as hot though, particularly ironic that the psychologist solved the subject's problem by taking control himself. Unfortunately that Matt lost out, but at least the psychologist and his assistant got a piece. The ending where the assistant stepped in was really really hot. My only mild complaint with the story, and a personal one at that, is that i don't get off on going so far as converting a subject's sexuality apparently from a happily straight married man to one who may very well have been influenced in that direction without consent. i understand that the straight to gay conversion definitely implies a high degree of control by the Dom/Hypnotist (or granted a strong susceptibility by the subject), which tends to make a story about dominance even more erotic, but morally it kind of irks me, even if it is fictional. That said, this did not spoil the story. i'm off to read more of your work! Thanks again!

svplgsmslm
6/2/21, 1:49 PM
@boi98229 Let's try typing something this time. Thank you for the kind remarks. I understand the moral issue. I am troubled by stories here that involve a parent/step-parent myself. One view of this genre is there is always degree of predatory behavior, and thus is impossible to justify. I view the "issue" though as one of releasing a hidden/dormant/repressed urge or trait. Thus I write in the first person with the character being encouraged/led/compelled to submit. The resistance followed by submission and then acceptance is more erotic to me than the actual "sex" act. And so "Charles" finds himself in situations he would have not willingly participated, but when the barriers are weakened, he submits. So this story is a sequel to the first Matt story. There is another one involving this psychologist posted on the EMCA, but it has FF characters as well, which was a bit too much for this forum. Thanks again. "Charles"
6/2/21, 11:29 AM
That Aaron should find himself in the same situation
Ravenclaw
6/2/21, 11:08 AM
sounds interesting hope there's
6/2/21, 10:26 AM
We need a second part with connor infest more humans
6/2/21, 9:09 AM
perfect little story
Anonymous
6/2/21, 8:38 AM
Another fantastic chapter, taking me to places I've never been! You have quite the imagination & a prodigious talent
May 25, 2020
Anonymous
6/2/21, 7:06 AM
Dear Tom Gungy, Could you write more about this story please. It is very hot and it should be more chapter than this.
Apr 22, 2007
boi98229
6/2/21, 5:35 AM
The series of letters served very well as the vehicle for telling every side of the story! i don't recall every seeing anything quite like it. The format served very well to summarize the intent of each of Vic's files without going into the detail of their content. Just as more important i think is the pace of the story, and the strategy Robert used to expose Graham to the files without revealing their nefarious intent. With the pretense of each reviewing the the work of the other, Robert managed to take control of Graham's mind and his manuscripts! Very clever! This is the genius i would love to find in a Master myself! The story is perfect as it is of course, but RobinHood70 does raise the interesting question of other possibilities. Certainly the ending leaves a lot of opportunity for additional imaginative mind control. As it is i suppose the readers will have to imagine for themselves what comes next. Thanks very much for your imaginatively leading as far as you did!
Anonymous
6/2/21, 3:22 AM
this is utterly so hot and so cute at the same time! congratulations, I didn't think this would be top-tier romance story but it is! keep writing!