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May 25, 2020
Anonymous
6/2/21, 7:06 AM
Dear Tom Gungy, Could you write more about this story please. It is very hot and it should be more chapter than this.
Apr 22, 2007
boi98229
6/2/21, 5:35 AM
The series of letters served very well as the vehicle for telling every side of the story! i don't recall every seeing anything quite like it. The format served very well to summarize the intent of each of Vic's files without going into the detail of their content. Just as more important i think is the pace of the story, and the strategy Robert used to expose Graham to the files without revealing their nefarious intent. With the pretense of each reviewing the the work of the other, Robert managed to take control of Graham's mind and his manuscripts! Very clever! This is the genius i would love to find in a Master myself! The story is perfect as it is of course, but RobinHood70 does raise the interesting question of other possibilities. Certainly the ending leaves a lot of opportunity for additional imaginative mind control. As it is i suppose the readers will have to imagine for themselves what comes next. Thanks very much for your imaginatively leading as far as you did!
Anonymous
6/2/21, 3:22 AM
this is utterly so hot and so cute at the same time! congratulations, I didn't think this would be top-tier romance story but it is! keep writing!
6/2/21, 2:02 AM
god that was so good, all I want is to be Kent
6/1/21, 10:48 PM
Omg, that story was oddly amazing, like honestly I was expecting erotic material for enjoying myself once and finish and while I definitely did for the first two chapters of the first part I found myself reading the rest because I genuinely got hooked up by the plot, the ending to the series was a twist that in retrospective it makes the scene when Lane got Dylan to his side foreshadowing something. But even then it's surprising how everything came to that. I wonder if the story is going to continue or not but regardless I love this ending, it is satisfying enough.
6/1/21, 10:23 PM
Some fun between Cerigo and Ross would have been nice
6/1/21, 8:53 PM
Full story is up on my Patreon if anyone is interested and can't wait for the full story. https://www.patreon.com/duskskullking

Martin
6/1/21, 8:58 PM
@DuskSkullKing Actually, if you want to place a teaser on GSS for a longer story behind a paywall, you can do that officially. The proper way would be a sponsored story: [See here for details](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/sponsored-stories/985). You get the additional bonus that the teaser will stay on top of the list for about 10 days. Usually that's the only way we allow partial stories where you have to pay for to read the whole thing.
6/1/21, 3:40 PM
Nice I'm loving it. Can't wait to see the next chapter. How does one contact you as I have an idea.

6/1/21, 3:54 PM
@nerdysuitedbaby Glad you're liking the story! The best way to contact me is through the forum private message system -- you can find the button to PM me on my author page.

6/1/21, 6:49 PM
@bluesuedewho I did just that, I hope you like my suggestions

6/1/21, 8:39 PM
@darkblade2814 Thanks for the suggestions! I might work some of them into the story.

6/1/21, 8:42 PM
@bluesuedewho I'm glad you liked
6/1/21, 8:38 PM
Commented on the wrong chapter last time. I'm excited to see Priapus again! His little guessing game is one of the hottest scenes in the story so far.
6/1/21, 8:34 PM
I was hoping we'd seen Priapus again soon!