Recent Comments

6/1/21, 10:19 AM
I am LOVING this. The changes to Rob's mind are so subtle that the reader feels hypnotized, too; I love when he contradicts himself (he goes from thinking that he can't tell the ghosts he's onto them to happily asking about the other ghosts, for instance). A slow burn is beautiful for this type of story: gradual mental changes, and the massage was achingly hot. Incredible!
6/1/21, 9:39 AM
We need more of this
6/1/21, 8:30 AM
Interesting, lets see how it goes
Daniel
6/1/21, 2:52 AM
wish the 'taking and corruption' took a bit longer dude I.J.S.
Pup Tyler
5/31/21, 10:38 PM
Very nice part. I would love to see the next one
5/31/21, 10:08 PM
Hot story, the dialogue is great. A modest criticism though, there are some grammar and punctuation issues that're pretty pervasive. Excessive commas and exclamation points, some issues with paragraphs that lead me to lose track of who's speaking. Small fixable issues in an otherwise great story
5/31/21, 8:34 PM
@ArdanWolfe Oh that hit the spot! Like three times today alone! LOL Thank you for a very satisfying chapter and as always, I look forward to the next part.

5/31/21, 10:02 PM
haha I'm very glad to hear, I just write as the scene unfolds to me. I was nervous about this chapter at first but I think it definitely picked up 😁@Uncle Arctos
Marc
5/31/21, 8:36 PM
Great story! I particularly love the description of the i mind control.
Lakritz24
5/31/21, 8:26 PM
The story is exiting, but short. Think further, and writhe! Jo.Jo.ZE.
5/31/21, 6:42 PM
Cant wait fornext.