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5/30/21, 1:42 AM
Also, what about Colin? Did he changed for real too?

5/31/21, 11:06 AM
@darkblade2814 No, he didn't. Read the poem from the first chapter. Colin didn't choke or sleep over, so while his dick has changed, he is still straight.

5/31/21, 11:34 AM
@thequirkyone I tought he did on choke on the dinner, my mistake
Anonymous
5/29/21, 2:06 PM
I was so happy to see an update! Happier than getting a covid vaccine! :) The shouting match between guys who are rubbing their hard cocks is so visually amusing. I instantly want this to be a porn scene. PS: chili on a dick can be very painful. Dicks are quite sensitive, and do not take kindly to substances that burn.

5/29/21, 3:30 PM
Re the chili, Yeah, I kinda worried about that after I thought about it. Originally, Kyle was gonna make them eat the chili dogs sensually (like the did in the story) but in a public place. But I ended up deciding it was too complicated to set up. I wasn't happy with this chapter tbh.

Anonymous
5/31/21, 11:22 AM
@Evelded This is a great chapter. No doubt about it. It's just that you haven't tried chili on your dick, I suppose. (And please don't). With a mind like yours, I can't imagine what you have in store when you want to role-play with your boyfriend lol. And trust me. I have read a lot of gay fiction, free and paid, hundreds of authors. You are in my top 5. I wouldn't hesitate to buy your ebooks should you decide to publish them.
EJG
5/31/21, 7:26 AM
Nice.. But coulda kept his cock,though shrank it if Kyles a true bottom.. Theres the other 'fag' pussy--that anus

5/31/21, 11:05 AM
@EJG Nick did keep his cock, Kyle is the only one whose shrunk.
Mar 6, 2020
5/31/21, 8:35 AM
This seems to be leading to something, ahh but what ? That is the question !
5/31/21, 7:07 AM
Great start. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Daniel
5/31/21, 6:09 AM
M O R E P L E A S E S I R I.J.S.
Daniel
5/31/21, 5:55 AM
W O W ! this is so hot, trying not to unload...thanks dude I.J.S.
Daniel
5/31/21, 5:39 AM
dude I find the 'taking' of authority figures ( bikers, cops, soldiers, firemen ) really hot...a cop or two on the team could help the business grow I.J.S.
5/31/21, 4:25 AM
I love a good straight boy turn into a gay slut. Hope to see more from this story.
5/31/21, 4:24 AM
I devoured this as quickly as David ate Eli's throbbing cock and seed!! Eagerly awaiting the next installment. The way you describe the torture of the characters, as they knowingly know consequences of pleasing each other, yet still letting them give into their carnal urges, is so sexy. I wish I was the next person to experience the pleasure and ecstasy that you so effortlessly describe. You are becoming one of my favorite writers. Please keep feeding your ravenous audience!!