and in the end Cody got what he wanted all along. I love a good Lovestory

The English is really good, just some tiny mistakes. I have seen native English speakers do far worse!

As per usual, a GREAT story. I agree with what others have mentioned already: This doesn't feel like a draft at all. As it is, it's much better than most other stories. Can't wait for those next chapters of Cop a Feel, Web of Trust and the like :D

God, this was really hot! I love the way you describe the hypnosis, usually it kind of bores me in other stories, but I'm always so interested (and turned on) by the complexities of it in your fics. I particularly liked the mixing of pleasure and revulsion with Kent, that was really hot. I also loved Cody describing in detail all the ways he didn't find Osamu manly or attractive, and then having Osamu slowly dominate him into submission through hypnosis right after. Another great moment was Osamu displaying his absolute power to Ahmed, and Ahmed being unable to keep himself from indulging in Cody despite knowing how wrong it was even though he wasn't hypnotized. Just amazing! (also, and this is just a personal preference, but I loved tiny twink Osamu domming/fucking all these big muscly "masculine" guys; not something I see much, and it really turns me on) I would say if you want to improve anything, it might be better to change around just how much Nick and Cody know as they're figuring out what's going on? They seem a bit too suspicious at the start (Osamu and Kent hanging out during the day a bunch *would* be strange, but I don't know if it was enough for Cody to listen for Kent leaving his room and then try to overhear what was happening in Osamu and Adam's room), and maybe not suspicious *enough* at the end; like when Cody thinks Osamu is having sex with his own father AND with Cody's dad, I think he'd be a bit more riled up than just going to have a calm chat with Osamu. It might be a bit boring, but maybe play out those first few days from Nick's perspective a bit longer and have them notice Kent and Adam obeying/deferring to Osamu in slightly strange ways instead of hearing the sex noises immediately. I think the sex noises would make sense if Cody first heard them in chapter 3 after Nick had already been hypnotized, but that's just my opinion. Other than that, it might be good to have titled chapters named after the character who's POV we're reading since the first few paragraphs can be a bit confusing before we understand who's perspective where in. But those are very minor suggestions that might just be very specific to me, overall its one of the hottest stories I've read of yours! Osamu displaying his power to Ahmed, groping Cody and offering him up like a prize while everyone else at the table defers to him, is genuinely one of my favourite scenes from this site!

Amazing work. Great pacing and great discoveries. Can't wait to see what happens next.

hottt. love this story.

the fact that you dumped these chapters out all at once netflix-style will be the death of me

sooo hot dude ! the drugging and aquiesence of the 'Bama boys almost took me over the edge ... more please sir I.J.S.

ooooooh,I know where this is going and I liiiiiiiike it

hot stuff dude, but you never disappoint - still waiting for a follow up on the airplane pilot and co- pilot story sir I.J.S.