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5/30/21, 10:36 PM
This was an amazing story, and even if the formula was almost the same, I’d said u delivered it each time with enough variations to keep it interesting the whole ride. U mentioned in a previous comic that u wanted to add more to this story, can u tell us what u have in mind? I’m really curious about what else u could have done here

5/30/21, 11:41 PM
@zeeker8b I didn't have too much specifically figured out, which was why I stopped where I did. I definitely wanted there to be a lot of fingering, fucking and body worship as far as the sex goes. I try to have a few go-to sex activities for my characters, and those were the ones that made sense to me for Osamu. And he definitely would've been into the scene Ahmed was imagining, with him drilling the two guys' holes while they were only allowed a little kissing and cuddling...the idea being that they, as a potential couple, are paying more attention to him than to each other. I also see Osamu as liking overt fawning over him. Not 24/7, of course, cuz that'd probably drive him up the wall, but when the guys *are* around him, they'd probably be touching him a lot, kneeling at his feet, offering to bring him things or do things for him...that sort of thing. In terms of general story dynamics, everyone except Ahmed would've spent the entire summer at the cottage, despite their initial plans. (Ahmed can't because of his job.) The idea there is just that there's nobody around to interfere with Osamu's hypnotic domination. As the summer progressed, everyone would've become indoor types, following Osamu's preferences. Although there'd probably still be a decent amount of outdoor activity, just so Osamu could get people out of his hair. He *is* the quiet type, after all, so he's not gonna want people around 24/7. And speaking of 24/7, Nick was a favourite from the start, so he would probably be the most enslaved. I didn't have any specific plans beyond that, but maybe instead of finding a job, he moves in with Adam and Osamu after they all went back home, becoming Osamu's 24/7 live-in slave, but thinking that he's just a roommate or that he's just staying there until he finds a job? That's just an idea. Like I said, I really didn't have much else in the way of concrete plans.
5/30/21, 11:32 PM
I enjoy a good transformation scene and this one was quite good. I'm intrigued by what the vampire wants with this company and if Eugene will cause problems. Really great worldbuilding and a good first chapter. Can't wait to read more!
5/30/21, 11:21 PM
This is a great start to what seems to be a very compelling and hot story. I like that Rob seems a bit oblivious to what's happening, and I'm intrigued on what the valet is preparing. Looking forward to the next installment.
Dec 17, 2020
5/30/21, 10:22 PM
needs a little work with descriptions as to y the men are doing what they r doing, y they r doing it & how r they made to come to the house in the first place, what draws them in.....u know a little bitmore details would b better like names for starters....baseball boy will do just fine for example.....but all in all a great start...... would like to read more.....^3^
5/30/21, 9:28 PM
Really need more of this series, pleaaase, maybe from Tyler's point of view as he plays?
5/30/21, 7:23 PM
Really good story! You've got a formula, but you know exactly the right way to deploy it, and this series is filled with hot scenes as, one by one, the other men submit to Osamu's sexual slavery, then rationalize their actions. My only critique is about the release strategy. By design, this story is fairly repetitive; with slight variations, what happens to Kent in Chapter 1 is what happens to Nick in Chapter 2, what happens to Cody in Chapter 3, and what happens to Ahmed in Chapter 4. If I were reading a chapter a week, I'd barely notice this. But in a marathon reading session, the formula is more noticeable. Also, if you'd released each chapter separately, I probably would have cum 4 times when reading this story, rather than just once!

5/30/21, 8:37 PM
@Hypnothrill You're not wrong about me having a formula, though that's very much something I want to try to break as I move onto stories after Cop/Web. This...was not that. :) This was actually something I never expected to release at all, much less with any kind of timing/strategy/thought of originality. It was just the idea that my brain happened to be stuck on after over a month of not cumming. It was entirely intended as a personal release for me, nothing more. I hammered away at it over the course of two or three days, then when the ideas ran out, I literally stopped writing right there. I happened to be taking a shower right afterwards, and that's when the idea hit me to make it a Community Story/Series. As soon as I was out of the shower, I released everything all in a batch. (Except it voluntarily stayed stuck in the queue for a couple of days to let Martin debug the Community Stories issue.) My thinking was basically "I've done what I'm gonna do, someone else take it from here." I never thought people would be this interested in it just on its own. :)
5/30/21, 7:24 PM
Love this version of 10 Little Indians! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Daniel
5/30/21, 7:00 PM
the seduction of the coach totally got me OFF dude ! I.J.S.
Daniel
5/30/21, 6:38 PM
hopefully some new hot dudes I.J.S.
5/30/21, 6:27 PM
Great start! I look forward to seeing more changes that are done to potential members of his school.