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DMK
2/15/25, 4:43 PM
I want more ! 🙏
DMK
2/15/25, 3:48 PM
Love this ! 😍
2/15/25, 1:01 AM
A great conclusion! Rocky finally beats Colt around the head with his feelings enough to win! Thank you for such a great story and I _especially_ look forward to the fantasy story that you have in the works!

2/15/25, 2:14 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Rocky almost had to beat him with a shovel to get him to do it!

2/15/25, 2:34 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Thanks for helping me get this done. The advice and support was much appreciated!
xxx
2/15/25, 1:20 PM
this didn’t rlly meet the expectation of the summary you wrote

2/15/25, 1:25 PM
@[xxx](/user/show/10058706) Oh no! Sorry that didn't work for you! I plan to revise the summaries for each chapter, at the moment there's only one summary for the overarching story :slightly_smiling_face:
Anonymous
2/15/25, 11:33 AM
I just read this. I would love to see more!
Anonymous
2/15/25, 10:49 AM
Best series I've read so far. I guess it was very relatable to me. Great job!
Andi
2/15/25, 9:19 AM
Theory: the fat man game that abe won at the beginning of the story was a previous victim. This hypnotist keeps adding humans turned into objects to the carnival.
Other
2/15/25, 6:46 AM
When the next chapter being release? I hope there is story how Zach was made
2/15/25, 5:06 AM
Amazing! Fantastic work!
Jan 16, 2025
2/14/25, 1:25 AM
I do love power exchange stories!! i love your induction wording and your use of triggers. You are clearly a student and lover of hypnosis yourself. Hypnosis is one of my favorite tools of a power exchange so i am excited to check out your other stories and your favorites. The longer and slower the seduction, the more succulent the shift in power. A few twists and turns along the way, which you apparently enjoy, just adds to the succulence of the shift. Personally i do have a moral preference for stories where karma affects the outcome, or at least the newly controlled slave has found a way to love his new life. And if the 'bad boy' wins in the end, he better be incredibly lovable!! Thanks for sharing your delectable imagination! Looking forward to more, whether it be an extension of this story or other stories. I am on my way to check them out now!!

2/15/25, 4:29 AM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Thanks so much for the comment! If you enjoy a really good karmic ending, you will love my story "The Perfect Couple"! ☺️