Recent Comments

5/27/21, 4:40 PM
Awesome new chapter! I'm excited to see what happens with Tick and with the doctor and farmhand!
5/27/21, 3:42 PM
Hot fucking story. I love how you play with the admiration and lust between these bros. Great work! Can we get a follow up where they fuck? :)
5/27/21, 3:21 PM
Totally hot story so far. I totally agree with Muscle-Flex's comments. In other Chapters will we learn how Tersend dealt with Zahl, and if Tersend gets packed and sent too his Bosses location. Also will we learn what happened to the two guards that were given the rocket drag, after their night of lust. Surely the boss would have found out about what had happened, and who was involved. And he would take steps to amend this breech of procedures. Thank for the Spoiler alert thats coming in the next chapter.
5/27/21, 2:49 PM
Every security man was issued a discipline cup, and Luke was sporting a discipline cup. Could it be a hint?
5/27/21, 5:53 AM
you're talking about omegas not betas. Betas are the yes man that rigth the cotail of there alpha they are the generals one step bleow the alfa omegas are the lowly boot licking fags

5/27/21, 2:39 PM
@GermanSeed Thank you. I admit I am a little naive to all the roles out there. I have edited beta to omega. Thank you for the insight! Greatly appreciated! :)
5/27/21, 10:30 AM
Fascinating stuff! I'm loving seeing a new take on these genres and the sex is *hot* - keep it up man!

5/27/21, 10:48 AM
Thank you so much 😊. Glad you enjoyed it. Definitely more coming.@Dace
Anonymous
5/26/21, 11:38 PM
So good.... prob. my all-time fav. of all your stories Man, if only I could write a better story than this... If only you could... If only anyone could... is that possible? Fantcdude had some great ones, too. It's hard to surpass, especially since it broke such fresh ground at the time. The physical change, the psychological, the resistance, the caving in... Thanks for such awesome work.

5/27/21, 9:34 AM
@ FanTCdude was the greatest of us all. i dedicated my novel PHOLUS REBORN to him!
5/27/21, 8:04 AM
Just a formatting comment. It's much harder to read when the dialog is just preceded by a dash, rather than surrounded by the normal quote marks. I'm afraid it put me off finishing these stories because it made it really hard to tell who was talking.
5/27/21, 7:40 AM
liked how you used the suggestions for the cops, being able to shift change, the bit about how the cop changed to cuddle the baby was a nice touch

5/27/21, 7:51 AM
Thank you 😊. Yeah quite a few people suggested that the hybrids needed to be able to shape shift. So I chose the Neanderthals because it was kind of like a werewolf or more accurately like the hulk. @MalSkin
May 23, 2021
Ed2you2
5/27/21, 7:24 AM
Loved it. Hoping there might be more.