Recent Comments

5/27/21, 8:04 AM
Just a formatting comment. It's much harder to read when the dialog is just preceded by a dash, rather than surrounded by the normal quote marks. I'm afraid it put me off finishing these stories because it made it really hard to tell who was talking.
5/27/21, 7:40 AM
liked how you used the suggestions for the cops, being able to shift change, the bit about how the cop changed to cuddle the baby was a nice touch

5/27/21, 7:51 AM
Thank you 😊. Yeah quite a few people suggested that the hybrids needed to be able to shape shift. So I chose the Neanderthals because it was kind of like a werewolf or more accurately like the hulk. @MalSkin
May 23, 2021
Ed2you2
5/27/21, 7:24 AM
Loved it. Hoping there might be more.
5/27/21, 6:33 AM
well! looks like I'm into unaware now, so thanks for that! Really great read, can't wait to check out more of your stuff!
5/27/21, 5:08 AM
Keep it up! :)
5/27/21, 4:52 AM
This is a hot take on this. I am turned on by it.
5/27/21, 3:19 AM
You have a marvelous mind!
CandyDarky
5/27/21, 3:19 AM
This is my favorite chapter, the hottest in my opinion. I love the way he uses his powers here and I hope to see more of the quarterback.
5/27/21, 2:52 AM
A thousand thanks for your comments @Muscle-Flex! It really means a lot. I'll post Chapter 4 soon. Spoiler: Holstrom should have followed procedures.
5/27/21, 2:24 AM
WOW! Original and well written. Your writing style will be referenced in my next chapter. Thank you for a great read!