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5/26/21, 12:04 AM
I love dumbing down stories, how this one escaped my radar? The dumbing down was very well written. Great job! I must go back to read it from the beginning!
5/25/21, 11:48 AM
We’ll done with some great scene setting. It reminds me a little of the SCP Foundation stories which is no bad thing! I love the premise behind this and I’m really looking forward to seeing where you take it!

5/25/21, 11:15 PM
@Ruffcub SCP is definitely on the list of influences!
Nutiper
5/25/21, 10:30 PM
Aw, this is so fun! I'm excited to see what comes next for our intrepid hero. It makes me curious to see what a "more casual" Valet would look like, too. And curious to see what Rob will find when he wakes up...
5/25/21, 9:28 PM
Very good understanding of hypnosis principles and turning them into something erotic themselves. I drooled when Alex drooled.
Anonymous
5/25/21, 8:47 PM
Lovely start! Would love to see Alex take a trip to the salon and do some shopping.
5/25/21, 8:02 PM
Great story! was not something i was expecting coming on here for but im not disappointed! i will gladly support a sequel

Baple
5/25/21, 8:07 PM
Haha yeah I thought it may be a bit off-center for this sight but I'm glad you enjoy! I'm excited to write an actual full length sequel at some point.@yeet_yeet
May 23, 2021
5/25/21, 6:49 PM
more,more,more!
5/25/21, 6:08 PM
Nice story, hope u want to expand it or makes sequels!

Baple
5/25/21, 6:35 PM
Thank you, I actually plan on a sequel soon. @zeeker8b
Anonymous
5/25/21, 3:21 PM
Fun story, really enjoyed it! Felt a little short, and would love a sequel if you're planning one, but it was a good read!

Baple
5/25/21, 6:35 PM
Thanks! It was mostly just a short story to get my juices flowing but I am thinking of a possible sequel!
Anonymous
5/25/21, 5:23 PM
part two??