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toy #4
5/24/21, 7:09 AM
looking forward to the next chapter -- you haven't "wrapped" it up yet.

5/26/21, 2:39 AM
@toy #4 I hope you get some excitement from chapter 3! Thanks for commenting. The feedback helps.
5/24/21, 10:28 PM
then what happened?

5/26/21, 2:35 AM
@Vikingforce I hope you like chapter 3. Please rate the story if you do. Thanks for commenting. It means a lot! CFLex
nycboot
5/26/21, 1:17 AM
I love Master Rob's sarcasm and the "been there, done that" attitude! Great start, looking forward to more.
5/26/21, 1:10 AM
all this leed up to what ??? you might as well continue !
May 23, 2021
cnycheckin
5/26/21, 12:48 AM
great story. looking forward to the next chapter
5/26/21, 12:10 AM
great chapter!
5/26/21, 12:04 AM
I love dumbing down stories, how this one escaped my radar? The dumbing down was very well written. Great job! I must go back to read it from the beginning!
5/25/21, 11:48 AM
We’ll done with some great scene setting. It reminds me a little of the SCP Foundation stories which is no bad thing! I love the premise behind this and I’m really looking forward to seeing where you take it!

5/25/21, 11:15 PM
@Ruffcub SCP is definitely on the list of influences!
Nutiper
5/25/21, 10:30 PM
Aw, this is so fun! I'm excited to see what comes next for our intrepid hero. It makes me curious to see what a "more casual" Valet would look like, too. And curious to see what Rob will find when he wakes up...
5/25/21, 9:28 PM
Very good understanding of hypnosis principles and turning them into something erotic themselves. I drooled when Alex drooled.