Recent Comments

5/23/21, 2:54 PM
i really like where this is headed! although it almost seems too easy for Ricky...

5/23/21, 3:07 PM
@redwood Haha, don't worry. These things have a tendency of getting complicated, don't they?
5/23/21, 11:54 AM
Ricky is evil but I understand his motivations and would probably do the same in his place

5/23/21, 3:06 PM
@ForgottenCradle Haha. Yes, he's not exactly a role model, is he? ;)
5/23/21, 7:36 AM
Hotttt. Can't wait for more

5/23/21, 3:04 PM
@Jonanator Thanks for the encouragement. ;)
hairyartist
5/23/21, 12:16 PM
I love this so much, thank you
Anonymous
5/23/21, 11:46 AM
I hope you continue this story and make an ending. I think it is very cool to read!
5/22/21, 8:11 PM
Hot as always Cracker. another "false alpha" brought to heel. Love your stories!!

Cracker
5/23/21, 10:30 AM
hey thanks @Mr Jack Off
Hypnotically Dapper
5/20/21, 11:21 PM
Awesome story, absolutely love it! I'm not a huge fan of "skater to prep", I'm just a lover of "non-prep to prep" in general! I thought the pacing was very good, and I hope we get to see more of The Photographer in future stories. In fact, your story inspired me to finally go back to a flattop. It's a little longer on top than Topher's but I plan on bringing it down to match his when I return to the barber. It's gonna be a preppy flat-tastic summer for me! :)

5/23/21, 5:01 AM
@Hypnotically Dapper As long as you want young men made into preppies, it's cool. :) Not sure if I'll have another with 'The Photographer' again or not. I don't like the stories to be too repetitive. Happy to have pushed you over the edge...er...put you on the level. >:) You say "finally go back to" - when did you have one before? How long has it been? Were you thinking of doing it? Very hot that you want yours even shorter. Though longer flattops are cool, too. I like that you referred to him as Topher. (After all, it's who he IS now.) >:)
nycboot
5/23/21, 2:11 AM
I like this story and I want to like it more. The following is only my personal opinion which you are free to disregard. Once I got through the first paragraph I was sure I was missing chapter 1 and spent a good amount of time looking for the non-existent chapter 1. That's because you introduce us first to Mike and because we have not seen/experienced anything he's done wrong, we empathize with them. As a result, it makes Zach look like an irrational and crazed man. There were actually passages where I said to myself "If only the author had created a better introduction, all the sadistic things he's doing could be even hotter." That's because we, the audience, would also learn to hate Mike and wish him the worst possible end, while sympathizing with Zach who had to go through such emotional torture. But because you don't have any of that (and you can't achieve that through a flashback), Mike seems like he's innocent, and Zach seems like he's just an insane sadist. Perhaps you can try for a chapter 1 and make this chapter 2. Thanks for writing.
5/23/21, 1:50 AM
I hope that Eli can keep going to his workouts. The idea of him repeatedly coming home like, "VALENTINE!!!" Because Gloria explained to him **again** that Jake is his only roommate is hilarious.
5/21/21, 7:25 PM
this was great! well written and with so much promise for whats to come...

5/23/21, 1:10 AM
@redwood Thank you, thank you. Part 2 will be published imminently - hope you like where it goes!