Recent Comments

Mitchell Morris
5/23/21, 9:33 PM
Loved the *in medias res* start here, and the picture book device was a really clever way to provide the backstory to the reader. Your particular brand of sadism is to my liking, and I've enjoyed your other stories as well. Your details are particularly brutal, and I love their delivery. I might suggest lowering the "temperature" a bit on the catalyst for revenge. I don't feel like you need to go to a place of "Mike did the worst thing possible" in order to justify Zach's actions. There's no act, no matter how heinous, to which this (particularly gruesome) transformation is going to be perceived as a proportional response. In other words: if this is what Zach is going to do to Mike, to me, it seems like he'd do it with or without being triggered by Mike's callousness. But that minor note aside, great read. Looking forward to your next piece of uniquely twisted terror.
5/23/21, 9:31 PM
I'm not sure I got everything, but this seems nice. I'm interested. Must admit I though at first the stone made Mike obedient. And then that he was about to force Pit to act in his movie.
Anonymous
5/23/21, 9:12 PM
I'm enjoying this!!!!
May 23, 2021
Anonymous
5/23/21, 9:05 PM
Great! Clever story!!!
5/23/21, 8:51 PM
I was just wondering about this story earlier today! Glad to see it back in commission.
5/23/21, 8:47 PM
Good story. Where are chapters 1 & 3?
May 23, 2021
Anonymous
5/23/21, 8:42 PM
great story...thanks!!
5/23/21, 4:45 PM
I love the idea of a delinquent being hypnotized! HOT as fuck.
5/23/21, 4:24 PM
you're off to a good start. I'm excited for the next part.