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5/21/21, 9:41 AM
oh wow,this ticked boxes I didn't know I had
5/21/21, 6:20 AM
Great chapter, getting the local police involved, it stops questions being asked, also as someone has said they have their own security now. we know that the cops are in there nut sacks waiting to be reborn as hybrids for the new race. my suggestion for now is, when they go back on duty they have the ability to shape shift to human form, to lesson suspicion for the reminder of the towns folk. reverting back to hybrids when with their clan.

5/21/21, 9:16 AM
The shapeshifting idea has come up a few times now as a suggestion...perhaps I can look into incorporating that. And the Neanderthal hybrids would probably make the most sense, kind like a werewolf thing, going from human to large hybrid man-beast. 🙂@MalSkin
5/21/21, 6:12 AM
Yet another great chapter, its good to see that Daniel is progressing - 2 things i note from this chapter is first after his encounter with "bleach", He realized that he needs Piss as an antidote, part of his conditioning from a previous chapter, the other thing i noticed was that Duke called him Danny, was that suppose to happen? at one point i thought name change, but thinking about it, Daniel is a far better name for the towns New Sheriff. Looking forward to the next chapter
Evan
5/21/21, 4:47 AM
Loving the progression here. The milking scenes were extremely hot and the connection between the guys. Plus I enjoyed sharing their piss with him as well. I guess his is toxic given he's flushing out the "bleach". Shame. Thanks for a fun series!
5/21/21, 4:25 AM
Great story!! Very glad to have you in the writing community!
Anonymous
5/20/21, 10:51 PM
Great story addition. I hope we see some more transformations though.
5/20/21, 10:45 PM
This is one of my favorites! Great writing about some of my favorite themes!!
May 20, 2021
5/20/21, 5:37 PM
MMMMMMM.... that was hot!