Recent Comments

5/21/21, 11:19 AM
Great story, written with a lot of detail! Kept me focused (and hard) the hole time. Been to a few rest stops and have had similar experiences. More chapters, please.

5/21/21, 12:04 PM
@MuscleSon69 I'm glad to hear I captured the ambiance well! Thanks for the feedback!
5/20/21, 9:40 PM
Great start! I like the power play element and I’m looking forward to seeing where you take it.

5/21/21, 12:03 PM
@Ruffcub If you like the power play elements, I think the next chapter will be right up your alley! Thanks for the kind words.
5/21/21, 11:55 AM
This was always one of my favorite of your stories. I especially love the cynical twist at the end, which suggests that government austerity and incompetence is about to release this muscle-zombie plague upon the world.

5/21/21, 12:02 PM
@Hypnothrill Thank you! It was a series of government blunders that caused the existence of the facility in the first place -- the guys were happy at home on their commune -- so it only makes sense that it's government blunder that "accidentally" releases them in the end.
Cracker
5/20/21, 1:08 PM
Thus is awesome. I can hard-ly wait for the novel.

5/21/21, 11:59 AM
@Cracker It's available right now! [LINK](https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0948LL6WW/ref=ppx_yo_dt_b_asin_image_o00_s00?ie=UTF8&psc=1)
5/21/21, 7:12 AM
Oh, being able to revert to 'human form', that would be a very useful thing. A stealth mode to blend in, it's the sort of thing you'd expect from a guardian. I like that!

5/21/21, 10:22 AM
Agreed, I think it will be a Neanderthal hybrids only ability, and be kind of an at will "werewolf" like situation. 😃@Uncle Arctos
5/21/21, 9:59 AM
wow,that was NICE
Bravo Monster
5/21/21, 9:54 AM
what about the next chapter?
5/21/21, 9:41 AM
oh wow,this ticked boxes I didn't know I had
5/21/21, 6:20 AM
Great chapter, getting the local police involved, it stops questions being asked, also as someone has said they have their own security now. we know that the cops are in there nut sacks waiting to be reborn as hybrids for the new race. my suggestion for now is, when they go back on duty they have the ability to shape shift to human form, to lesson suspicion for the reminder of the towns folk. reverting back to hybrids when with their clan.

5/21/21, 9:16 AM
The shapeshifting idea has come up a few times now as a suggestion...perhaps I can look into incorporating that. And the Neanderthal hybrids would probably make the most sense, kind like a werewolf thing, going from human to large hybrid man-beast. šŸ™‚@MalSkin