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May 20, 2021
5/20/21, 4:05 PM
Short and sweet! Love the twist
5/20/21, 3:51 PM
Very kinky and well written
5/20/21, 7:09 AM
hottt

5/20/21, 1:14 PM
@Jonanator Glad you enjoyed it. Working on Part 2 soon!
boi98229
5/20/21, 5:44 AM
Thanks so much, Hypno-Tales, for this sexy and very entertaining story. You did a wonderful job of describing Mowgli's brainwashing. The depths to which you had Kaa take Mowgli's trance and his sense of absolute obedience and devotion were amazing! I felt like going into trance myself and was able to stay just conscious enough to continue reading. If you will forgive me for being too direct, your English is somewhat awkward in places. Strangely though in this context, with my mind rather fuzzy anyway, it seemed so much like English poetry where the essence of the message was more important than the way things were worded. Any errors in wording or sentence structure didn't seem in my mind to make any difference to your wonderful story-telling.

5/20/21, 9:07 AM
@boi98229 Oh, thank you very much for your comment. I have loved reading it and being able to hear that you enjoyed the story, I appreciate your words very much and I am very satisfied that I have made you have a good time reading my story. :) I really wanted to put a lot of emphasis on those details that you mention, the depth of the trance, the absolute and delicious feeling of submission and devotion to his master. Hopefully this summer I will be able to finish one of the three new stories that I still have unfinished. I have nothing to forgive, don't worry ^w^. Certainly my English is strange, although I hope it is understandable. First I wrote the text in Spanish and then I gradually translated it into English (for me it is easier to do so), so it is likely that many sentences maintain a structure similar to Spanish, resulting in that peculiar result. Anyway, please, if you find a serious error that makes it difficult to understand, I would appreciate it if you mention it so that I can fix it. Thank you very much for your comment. :)
Anonymous
5/20/21, 5:03 AM
Love this series! Please keep going!
5/20/21, 1:09 AM
Oooooo! Or the local beer supply! Sneak into the local tavern or two and leak some semen into the kegs on tap. Maybe the town bar AND the rougher biker/redneck bar on the outskirts of town! 😉

5/20/21, 1:13 AM
Very possible, as Billy clearly frequented a place when he was fully human. Perhaps he'd know how to get in a taint the drinks 🙂@Uncle Arctos

5/20/21, 2:14 AM
@ArdanWolfe You know what he probably does, and Vincent probably frequents the other bar and hangs out with a cigar and a beer on the smoking porch out back. Might even be friends with the bartender and knows a LOT about the bar. Wonder if Gavin moonlights as a bouncer at the same bar?

5/20/21, 2:28 AM
Well now I have plenty of ideas to work with, gotta see what fits in the next chapter. Thank you again for all the good feedback and input 😄@Uncle Arctos
Anonymous
5/19/21, 10:17 PM
such a hot story!!
5/19/21, 8:52 PM
This is an interesting resolution to both clan house security and the threat of police intervention. now if they can get their semen into the water system, they'd be able to steadily process the whole town, picking and choosing who gets made into watchdogs or not.

5/19/21, 10:05 PM
Ah that would be a quick and efficient option....an option worth exploring. Thanks for the feedback. 😄@Mind Labyrinth